• Published 15th Jul 2013
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The Twilight Corruption - kalakala



When rejected by her friends at an important moment, Twilight learns of a spell which can make everything better... For EVERYONE.

Comments ( 7 )

Slightly anti-climactic.

Even if the book was destroyed, Twilight could remember it and she have enough time to remember every word.

5595958 Yeah, he would have just took it to prevent more learning about it, because I very highly doubt that Twilight would give anyone else the secrets to mind control.

5595961 Maybe yes, maybe not, maybe she could make a copy... If the author is not going to continue everyone can dream about what could happen

Awesome story, short but very interesting.

Ireally wishe to make a prequel, but not soon, if you grant me permission of course. :pinkiehappy:

Yeah, screw releasing them!
Better ending :twilightsmile:

So she is given a chance to redeem herself and she chooses instead to go ahead and continue manipulating them?

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