Changing Twilight

Chrysalis decided to use Twilight to kill Candace. Using a magic to increase Twilight's rage and some more magic to mess with her head. Queen Chrysalis might just have a new general for her amry.
Warring: Gore, mind control, murder, and insanity.

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nioniosbbbb

nioniosbbbb #1 · Jan 5th, 2015 · 8 · 1 ·

No... This is many kinds of bad. Not to mention utterly contrived.

Twilight Best Pony

Twilight Best Pony #2 · Jan 12th, 2015 · 4 · 1 ·

DiscordFan

DiscordFan #3 · Jan 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

...
Awesome...

MitchellTF

MitchellTF #4 · Feb 3rd, 2015 · 7 · ·

I'm a fan of mind control and TF...and this is bad. As is put: It's contrived. Chrysalis isn't any more 'clever' then the show Chrysalis, it's just that Cadence doesn't get to say anything. The changeling egg comes out of nowhere, and the hypnosis and transformation is too quick to really be interesting to TF fans.

The Fiery Phoenix

The Fiery Phoenix #5 · Feb 10th, 2017 · 4 · ·

I like this. Can there be a sequel where
1) the reaction of Celestia, the mane 5 and spike, Luna,and Shining armer.
or
2)the mane 5 and spike joining twilight as changelings and how it goes for Queen Chrysalis with seven generals and the princesses reaction.(And Queen Chrysalis decide not to kill Cadence would be cool)