The first part in the Light and Darkness Series
We will kill you all! Even if we have to do it one pony at a time!
Princess Celestia wants Princess Luna to make some new friends now that she has returned from being Nightmare Moon. Luna is already acquainted with The Elements of Harmony and that's really about it. Celestia wants Luna to go visit Ponyville, a much less formal place than Canterlot to possibly make some new friends. However, little that Celestia even Luna knows, this will soon be the worst idea that Celestia has ever had.
Based off the famous movie: An American Werewolf in London.
Chapters (5)
That is actually got a nice idea this story for once I read a story with a plotline I don't recognize. Keep up the great work.
5943876 There's a sequel coming out for this story after this is finished, so I guess it's something you can look forward too.
well i can look forward to next chapter already
another great thrilling chapter but..
we have to wait until December? wow now that's is gonna be a long time i hope i won't forget this story
5966133 Did I accidently put in the wrong date? I did, wow I'm a dumbass, lol no it comes out tomorrow. Actually the story is getting two updates, so you can look forward to that.
5966508 oh phfew :)
Werewolf, werewolf, werewolf, werewolf...
Flash! NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well, no way a FlashLight shipping is featured in this. Still reading though, so far it's getting good.
I. Impressions of chapter 1.
i. Luna can walk into town and nopony pays her ANY attention.
ii. Damn mayor mare is disrespectful as fuck. (that's Princess Luna to you common ponies lol)
iii. Luna somehow knows that Twilight would "of course" live in a library, yet she has no clue who spike is.
iv. Where did they get the sleeping bags?
v. Well that escalated quickly.
So far I kinda like it.
I. Impressions of chapter 2:
i. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT DERPY!
ii. Good job Luna. Capslock = Respect
iii. oh shi- Twilight is a wearpony?
Nooo how could you kill Twilight
, why not just trap her in some kind of cage while they look for some kind of cure
-Techy
6401384 There was no cure, they only way to liberate her of it was to kill her
6402901 Technically that's true, but on the other hand as an author you could have said the cure was getting bitten by another ponywolf or something
. Still it's your story and I commend you for writing it 
.
-Techy
Look here. The idea's really good and all, but I suggest you get an editor or pre-reader.
The plot has a good start, but your writing is really rushed, and there are some grammatical errors.
I just want to be a good influence on others!
6732204 I could really use this kinda criticism being that this series is still on going (please check out the other 2 stories and give some feedback plz). Thank you