• Member Since 8th Mar, 2013
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Mintleaf


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Want moar! Another chapter, please. :twilightsmile:

Moar Please i want to see what happens next

I like to see what happens next.

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Okay.. I write a clopfic and I get four comments O_O well I guess I should start on the more interesting chapter then. :twilightoops:

counter the thumbs down :pinkiecrazy:

2945137 Hm.. I've made quite a few changes now, so Celestia doesn't seem like such a troll but they are only temporary, I am planning to change it to just the Celestia part, but I need to make it longer now. :trollestia:

Okay.. wha???? I guess people like this... on with the hypnotism! and rewriting of prologue, I really don'y like it

I sadly agree that the prologue was terrible. Still, full steam ahead is my suggestion.

2945652 Lol, re-writing now, if you please, I wrote it in a rush because I needed to get to 1000 words, chapter 1 was actually written first and I really didn't plan to have a prologue.I think I might just write a very long description of Celestia, finding the book.

cant wait for more of this fic, havent seen a good hypnotism story in a while :twilightsmile::ajsmug::pinkiecrazy:

hypnotism is wrong and celestia being a bitch, as she always is and going to rape twilight. WOO! another one of those fics.
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Heh, if you want a twist on this, maybe you should have Twilight try and hypnotize Celestia as well...

Comment posted by Optimist15 deleted Jul 30th, 2013

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who says i was trying to troll in the first place?

2960762 You're a troll, and a boring one at that, goodbye.

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lawl ok.
just stating an opinion makes me a troll ok.

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That's kinda the point of the story. Mind control and all.

possibilities are everywhere:pinkiehappy:

Guys if he doesn't like this kind of fic, it's fine v-v I don't really mind now the reason there has been no updates is because my computer fucked up on me, 2958446 also good idea, :twilightsmile:

3059663 Thanks! it sounds intriguing to me at least. first Twi's hypnotized by Tia, then later, Tia offers the chance, and Twi does so...

3059688 Yeah I might add that to the story :pinkiehappy: sounds cool

3059816 Sweet...hey, maybe Tia practiced on Luna to make sure it worked...and so Luna's also hypnotized! what do you think about that?

3059663 sucks about your computer hope you can update soon

3059818 So many possibilities :pinkiecrazy:

3066837 Yeah I hop my computer stops stupid

3067367 I hereby order you to make it happen! Twi tries (And succeeds) to hypnotize Celestia, and Luna's hypnotized as well! DO IT NOW!!! AND MAKE MORE!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

What's the source of the image?

"Yay! Hypnotism! I LOVE this stuff!"

*Sees Anthro tag*

"...fuck."

3067953 http://therealfate.deviantart.com/art/Celestia-s-Mount-365411843 it is very edited in the cover, but this is the original, original image :twilightsheepish:

Is this ever going to continue? We never even got to the hypnosis!

Hope this story continues at some point, I was getting excited!

so... is this thing still going on?^^

Guys.........this story is dead:ajbemused:
R.I.P. Mintleaf's story:ajsleepy::fluttershysad:

4186019 Hello again! also I'm thinking it's dead...which is a darn shame...

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