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DaymanHS

A guy who loves Mlp, video games, anime, and Kamen Riders

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LSParg
LSParg #1 · Dec 13th, 2019 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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At the moment, it seems like a good story, leaving aside grammar because I am not good at it, but I have a question: in the celestial canon he hid his relationship with NM, but the guards recognized the brother of heavenly, so, in this AU celestia Didn't he hide his story or just tell a select group?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #2 · Dec 13th, 2019 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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A select few knew of him due to their ancestors fighting beside him though I will be explained in the next chapter

Pete100
Pete100 #3 · Oct 15th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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Honestly, the grammar makes it a little confusing. Also, did you put an equestria girl tag because they look like their human counterparts?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #4 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10483953
Yeah though at the time i was thinking of adding the Equestria girls universe in this story but now I am doing something else but will still mention Sunset shimmer

Pete100
Pete100 #5 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484088
Is that why you have the equestria girls tag?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #6 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484141
Yeah though its not only her but others as this is my take on the mlp story

Pete100
Pete100 #7 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484267
So, they are basically anthro, minus the snouts and hooves?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #8 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484310
Yeah I wanted to combine the design of equestria girls and anthro in this story

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #10 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484770
The Frank story has every pony as anthropomorphic equines

Pete100
Pete100 #11 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484830
While these are a combination of equestria girls and anthro.

Pete100
Pete100 #13 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484916
Ok, I think I get it a little bit, but some of the grammar makes it complicated.

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #14 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10484965
Yeah keep in mind this is my first attempt at a story same for the Frank story

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #20 · Oct 16th, 2020 · · · Prologue: Return of the Prince?!!! Updated 2020 ·
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10485343
Hopefully I will post more once I post a few for frank also the art cover is my design

Pete100
Pete100 #22 · Jan 19th, 2021 · · · Chapter 1: The Awakening (re-edited) updated 2022 ·
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Every day I have been looking over the patient’s injuries and so far, each day his body begins to heal in a rapid pace. I first noticed after the third day his ribs were completely healed than on the sixth day the cuts on his body began to fade and the gash on his gut is completely sealed.

Shouldn’t the ribs heal last?

Shining was in the middle as the mare on his left was a yellow skinned female with orange and yellow spiked hair like fire wearing a blue skintight body suit with yellow designs in the shape of lightning bolts, circular googles hanging around her neck, a pair of pony eyes and wings behind her back along with a tail and hooves instead of feet.

So the pony eyes are behind her back?

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Note: this was all I could find of her.

If we’re meant to click on it, it doesn’t work.

Though what stood out the most was her bat like appearance as she had bat ears, wings, and blue eyes with slits in the middle, but still has hooves instead of feet and is carrying a small sword on her left side and a few daggers strapped to her thigh.

Wouldn’t a small sword be a dagger?

“Presenting the following ponies Spitfire captain of the Wonderbolts, Shining Armor captain of the Royal Guard, and captain Blade Dancer of the Equestrian Rouges.”

Equestrian Rouges?

“You are correct Dancer, Crimson Star did die during the battle against Nightmare Moon, but before he died, he told something in his dying breath something that I at the time did not understand, until now. He told me not to cry for he will return, but not as what he was before, but as someone far greater than he could ever be, and I believe that the human fell in the form of a shooting star is him and is currently resting in the infirmary.

What did he mean by “someone far greater than he could ever be”?

“But that’s still impossible Crimson Star was many things, but he wasn’t capable of rising from the grave.” Said Spitfire who was in denial at all of this to which Blade Dancer stepped with her response. “It is be possible that this human is a descendant of Crimson Star one that was kept secret from us and from you as well your majesty.” Celestia nodded as knowing that it is possible as she lifted her hand silencing both Shining and Spitfire who were still debating on the whole thing as they faced.

A lot of thing would have to had happened in order for that to be possible.

“As of right now the human resting in the infirmary will be waking up soon and once that happens, he will need to regain some of his strength which is I am having you 3 train him back to full health.

She better mean physical therapy.

Blade Dancer rolled her eyes at this as Celestia was aware of their words as she responded, “I am aware of this, but let me remind you that you each possess other skills that could benefit him since Crimson was skilled in other forms of combat than magic or flight. Shining your skills in tactics and ground combat will aid in regaining his strength, Spitfire your skills in hand-to-hand combat will aid in regaining his speed, and Dancer your skills in the blade will aid in regaining his sword skills. But if you’re not interested than it is fine the reason why I asked you all here to know if your interested in training our human visitor so do any of you have any objections to this?”

Sounds cool, but i don’t know if that’s a good idea.

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #23 · Jan 19th, 2021 · · · Chapter 1: The Awakening (re-edited) updated 2022 ·
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I can see your point honestly I should have edited some parts of this chapter and as for some parts of it but as for some this is something I wish to do something new since its never done before in other stories. But thank you for pointing this out

Pete100
Pete100 #24 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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In an unknown location stood a building that had the distinct appearance of a cathedral church and inside were a group of hooded individuals who stood around a circular table with the mark of a red 5-pointed star in the center as candles that light up the room. Soon walked in another figure who held a wooden staff and wore and amulet with the same red star on it as he stood before the others as they all faced him.

Is it supposed to be that satanic star symbol?

“I understand your concern, but I assure to you that this human is the one we have been waiting for.” The elder then motions another member to come forward a female in a grey hood though what stood out was the broken horn on her forehead as she stood by the elder.

Hey tempest, when did you get here?

Once Dr. Scrubs gave the okay on Dayman’s rehabilitation he was then sent to the training yard with the three captains as his trainers. Though he questioned why, they said that it was to help him get into shape after being cooped up in the castle for so long to which the human just shrugged and agreed to it to the relief of the captains. He did receive some looks from the guards that were training there though they were informed from the princess of some pony called a human was staying at the castle, but they were not used to seeing a being without pony ears, a tail, wings, a horn, and hooves. But that all changed after seeing the kind of training that the human was put through ranging from lifting weights, running in the track field with weights around his ankles, as well seeing him maneuvering through a makeshift obstacle course with ease to the surprise of the guards and shock to his trainers. It also grew even more once Dayman started training with Spitfire in martial arts only to copy her movements in perfect synched to her with every punch, kick, and step she made. And in the end his movements were faster as every punch and kick looked like a blur and every time, he hit something he would shatter it with ease. In a month, his skinny demeanor was now more muscular to the level of Bruce Lee as he stood tall all fired up as he was moving around the yard doing warmups as he shows off the results.

God damn, what’s up goku? Didn’t know you’d be here.

Soon it was time to train with Blade Dancer as they were both were using wooden swords as they started to clash strikes with each other, though in the beginning Dayman struggled to block her attacks, but as he held the wooden sword in a samurai stance, he began to fight back to the shock of Blade Dancer as each strike caught her off guard. It was the that he swung in a downward angle as Dancer was almost unable to block it as the force of it broke her wooden sword in half as to the shock of the thestral pony as Dayman quickly stood back with worry.

Samurai stance?

“That was incredible sword work you must have been a master of the blade in your past for you to fight like that. Skills like that would be perfect for the Equestria Rouges.” She says in glee as Shining knocks her to the side.

I kinda forgot what the equestria rouges were.

Note: I am using this design of Twilight, but it will soon change in the future so stay tuned.

Really?

“So Dayman. What exactly are you I mean you look like a stallion, but you don’t the usuals features of one?” Asked Twilight as Dayman responded.

Which are?

“Well, I am a human in fact the very first human to ever arrive in Equestria at least from what Princess Celestia has told me.”

Isn’t she lying?

“Forgive me, but what you did just now was something that Crimson also did when I was overwhelmed with royal duties. It’s great that you inherited his caring demeanor along with the many other unique skills from what your trainers have mentioned in the reports they gave me.” She responded as this made Dayman scratch the back of his head feeling a bit bashful at the praise.

So skills are genetic?

“Do these look familiar to you?” she asked as she turned around and presented him with some items that were covered in a golden aura and were gently floating towards them and handed off to Dayman as he began to examine them. The first item was a black and red leather jacket with padding around the shoulders and elbows with short sleeves and around the collar was a silver cross that dangled on a small ring as well as a design of a red serpent dragon with a black and white mask as he was in the form of a strange circular symbol on the back. The next item was a pair of grey metal glove with armored padding in on the back of the hand, studs around the knuckles, and pointed ends on the tip of the fingers, along with black cuffs around the wrist. The next item was a pair of black boots with armored padding around the front and bottom with straps along the lower shin to the ankle with a red gem embedded on one side of each boot.

Ok, that’s a little cool.

“You arrived with these items which happen to belong to my brother many years ago but were thought to be lost along with more of his possession, except for the jacket of course. The gloves and boots are what my brother used to channel his magic as a conduit just like how unicorns and alicorns use our horns to channel magic.” Said the princess as Spike stared in awe in the gear while Twilight was even more curious than before.

They didn’t think the jacket was lost because he was wearing it?

“What’s a cutie mark?” He asked causing the baby Dragon and Mare to go wide-eyed and their jaws dropping at his words. It was then that Celestia stepped in to prevent another scene.

How is that shocking?

“To answer your question dear, I wish to discuss something with you and no its not related to your training as for it is something serious that I had to speak with you in private.” She stops for a moment knowing what was coming next she took a deep breath before looking back at Dayman. “Have you ever heard of the tale of the mare in the moon?”

So he’s gonna fight nightmare moon?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #25 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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Well to answer your question the reason why he is progressing fast is genetic thought not only due to him being related to Crimson Star but from what he went through before coming into equestria which will be explained in a future chapter. And yes he will fight Nightmare Moon plus the gear was actually something I made when I first created Dayman in my art. The serpent dragon on his back is actually something that my friend came up with. Also Celestia was referring to the gloves and boots belonging to Crimson the jacket was something Dayman came in.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom
OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #26 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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Will the story go though after Season 1? Even though 2-7, Movie, 8, and finally Season 9?


Also, when Luna is finally freed. She is gonna be SUPER Depressed, Guilt, and Remorseful for "killing" her adopted brother in the past. Then tried to KILL the Recent one ( Dayman).

*Angry at Nightmare Moon/Luna for the Murderous Deed!!!!* 😡

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #27 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10719922
Yes but she will also learn that it was beyond her control as it was caused by someone else as Dayman could understand her since he went through something like that back home.

Also it will follow the seasons though some parts maybe altered along the way as I won't have the princesses retire because we can all agree that it was simply a stupid idea.

Like I said all will be revealed in future chapters.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom
OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #28 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10719963

Okay, I guess. But, I just like for her to apologize at least. And Dayman went though something similar? What happened? But I will probably figure that out in the future chapters.

And as for the other Seasons. Makes sense for the Princesses to not retire. Especially to Luna. Because, remember what happened to her in the "Thousand Year" Time skip. And will Equestria Girls be involved? Because, I do see Three Earth's in the picture.

Plus, I don't want Cozy Glow to be a Bad Guy. Because, having a KID as a Super Villain, her reasoning being "Friendship is Power" is FRICKIN Dumb, and got heavily punished like a Prison or turn to stone do piss of a lot of people!!!!!

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #29 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10719995
She will as for equestria girls it will not exist as they will enter Daymans world that is connected into 3 separate worlds. Though Sunset will be in the story but in what part I will keep as a surprise the same with cozy glow.

And Like I said before it's my take so some things will be different.

OP Omni God-Emperor Doom
OP Omni God-Emperor Doom #30 · Mar 13th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10720020

So, if Equestria Girls didn't exist. But Sunset will play a part. And Dayman and his Earth is connected to THREE other Worlds??!! How/Why?! I guessing that Dayman has more enemies from those worlds will be probably be involved in Equis/Equestria?

Pete100
Pete100 #34 · Apr 19th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10777471
Oh. Because, you forgot to push the reply button.

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #35 · Apr 19th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10777486
Oh damn it also the star that was mentioned that it's not a satanic star since I mentioned it was a 5 pointed star

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #37 · Apr 19th, 2021 · · · Chapter 2: Time skip and history lesson (Updated 2022) ·
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10777795
Yes but I was going for a normal star 🌟 not the upside down one

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #43 · Jun 1st, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Heading to Ponyvile part 1 (updated 2022) ·
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10841643
Damn it I will try to fix it later hopefully it will work

Pete100
Pete100 #44 · Jun 1st, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Heading to Ponyvile part 1 (updated 2022) ·
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During the first few lessons with Celestia Dayman had some struggles when trying to concentrate his power through his gloves and boots, Twilight would offer some aid, but so far nothing.

So does the gloves and boots have powers or is it his?

“Many years ago, the kingdom had not just one ruler, but two rulers two of them being the alicorn sisters who had control of the celestial bodies for I had control over the sun while my sister Princess Luna had control over the moon and in the middle was Crimson Star who acted as the guardian to both sisters and aided us in creating the kingdom that we now live in. Unfortunately, when the ponies started to favor the day over the night the unity between the two had broken as Luna was consumed by her jealousy as it turned her into the being that many would forever remember her called Nightmare Moon. She then led a revolt against me and Crimson in the hopes of taking over the throne and plunging the kingdom into an eternal night. During the battle Crimson sacrificed his life to protecting the day princess after taking lethal hit to the chest while I used an ancient set of artifacts called the elements of harmony as its magical power engulfs Nightmare Moon in a pillar of light before sealing her away in her own moon trapping her there for a thousand years.” Celestia stops for a moment as Dayman stands before as she sighs and looks over toward the window.

So what did crimson control?

“The elements are not something that any pony could claim they must earn them only then can they use them, and this goes for the bearers that you and Twilight will meet during the summer sun celebration. Which is why I wish for her to seek the elements on her own terms and not because she was told to find them because she was meant to. But promise me that you will protect her at all costs and that you and Luna will come back in one piece.” She said grabbing both of his hands and lifting them up.

That seems like an odd reason not to tell someone about a weapon that could stop the end of the world, but what do I know.

“I guess I can’t argue with that anyway I have been looking for you because I may have found something important about Nightmare Moon. Also, you don’t have to call me Miss Sparkle just Twilight is fine now come on.” She says as the human nods at her as she proceeds to pull him forward by the hand as they made their way back into the castle, passing by the various servants and guards as they all wave toward Dayman as he waves them back with a smile.

I wonder how upset she’s gonna be if/when she finds out he already knew?

“Ah she finally responded let’s see what it says.” She says as she proceeds to read what it says only to go wide-eyed as this makes the human curious as he also looks over the letter.

“Twilight get a life…..” is what he read off.

OMFG!!! Please tell me that’s what it actually says.

Dayman however was intrigued at her ability to kick a tree like that as a part of him wondered she would spare with him as he shook his head as the group approached the mare as Twilight was the first to face her.

Something tells me one kick form her will break his bones.

Twilight and Spike introduce themselves, however they noticed their human friend was strangely quiet and as they turned to him, they notice the sad look on his face as Apple Jack, her siblings, and Granny Smith take notice of this as well as Apple Bloom walks over to him and tugs the sleeve of his jacket. And as the disguised human turns to her he goes wide-eyed to see a young human girl with red ruby hair wearing a black dress shirt with a red skirt looking back at him as he shakes his head and sees Apple Bloom in front of him.

What’s that about?

She knew about how he was suffering from amnesia after waking up from a comma and has been recently getting small pieces of his memories and wondered if the girl he mentioned was someone Dayman knew. It was then that she and Spike noticed the downtrodden look on Dayman’s face.

Really?

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #45 · Jun 2nd, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Heading to Ponyvile part 1 (updated 2022) ·
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10843212
It's a power within him.

Also twilight will be pissed

Also the girl is someone from his memories and like I said he is slowly getting bits of his memories though all will come back to him soon.

DaymanHS
DaymanHS #49 · Jun 2nd, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Heading to Ponyvile part 1 (updated 2022) ·
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10843476
I am glad that your interested in this story I thought everyone was only focused on my Frank story

Pete100
Pete100 #50 · Jun 2nd, 2021 · · · Chapter 3: Heading to Ponyvile part 1 (updated 2022) ·
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10843501
Oh yeah. I may need to catch up on that when I have time.

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