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SwiperTheFox


This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.

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Twilight promises Rarity that a new, experimental spell will make her stronger, smarter, and faster. It works! Yet Rarity wakes up the next morning only to discover a strange side effect. She looks in the mirror and sees a... he. Twilight sheepishly suggests that Rarity enjoy this "vacation from herself" and wait until the spell undoes itself, a full week later.

He calls this new male self 'Purity', and he pretends to be Rarity's cousin, helping out after Rarity left for a sudden business trip. Purity tries to keep things quiet, and he goes about life as normally as possible. However, a new body means new... urges. Purity struggles to keep himself off of his old friends. He also must deal with a new customer named Blackberry, just coming in from Hoofington, that falls head-over-hooves in love with him. Blackberry feels rather weirded out, since he's only been into mares before, but Purity seems just so elegant as well as so incredibly beautiful. Purity can't seem to help himself from falling into the same trap.

Can Purity keep his relationship with his friends from turning into something pervy? Can Purity tell Blackberry the truth? What will happen when the seven days run up?

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 38 )

-claps- good job...my good sir, you can write....tracking and i hope more comes out soon.

Oh, I know you ^.^
You follow Your Best Shot, right?
Great story! :D

Yay more Swiper fic! Cute idea and slick presentation, as always. :raritywink:

I'm glad you decided to follow through with this one! Here, have my hand.

sounds good, I'm tracking. crazy twilight :twilightsmile:

I read the description. ALREADY TRACKING BEFORE I READ THE STORY.:rainbowwild:

Sounds interesting so far. I think I like Rarity/Purity's inner voice.

Am I seeing things with that cover art, or is that strand of hair shaped in a way under her horn that makes it look, suggestive? :twilightblush:

Story ending of this chapter is a damn cliffhanger!

Another great chapter ...keep it up -wink-

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Yeah, I see that too.

Looks like a nice foreshadowing of Rarity/Purity's new parts, don't you think? :raritywink:

Still don't get it..,
Is rarity in love with twilight or what?

Fun stuff so far!

*Le track*

Thanks to everyone for all of the great comments.

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She has/had a light crush, not really love. :raritycry::twilightblush:

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No worries. They'll be some nice playful romantic tension between Purity and Twilight later on as well. Crushes don't really die, do they? They just bounce around in your heart for a while. :raritywink: Not to mention Pinkie Pie's upcoming romantic-ish reaction to Purity, as well. :pinkiegasp:

The heart of this story is Purity's marshmallow-y plot being eyed a lucky stallion. Twilight will have... some fun as well. Don't worry. :twilightsmile:

Well, er.
I'm not sure what to make of this at this point.

SICK AND TWISTED, BOY!

Or is it girl....:rainbowhuh:

Oh Rarity, you sure can pick 'em. :pinkiehappy:

I'll go ahead and edit this a little bit to clean things up. I won't change that much, but it should look a lot better.

I'm having trouble imaging Purity, but I'm also apprehensive to Rule 63! :fluttercry:

Feels like anime in here :pinkiegasp:

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Is that a good thing or a bad thing? :duck:

:rainbowderp:not sure if want anymore...

"I don't what the circumstances. "
"I don't care what the circumstances are".

Pitty this is on On Hiatus... its quite a good story. Very amusing read...

Aah, and then you forgot about it, I guess.

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I didn't forget it... I've gotten mixed up in other things. There are lot of fics that I've left incomplete for a while and then added too.

For this one, well, I'm not too sure. I'll need to go back through and maybe tweak things. Plan out what I want to do specifically later on with the Purity date as well as possible competing dates with Twilight. See where the love triangle goes.

So, did you like this story here so far? Have any thoughts?

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Mainly: I noticed that you used phrases like, "She curled her head up," an awful lot, so much that it became noticeable. Figured this was an "older story" and that you've likely improved-- and that I would incorporate the phrase into my own speech and writing, because it does describe clearly (imo) what you meant for it to do.

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but yes, I enjoyed the story. Sorry I can't give you details, I already began another of yours.

I was, however, in tears that Purity can't brush his hair. Please allow hairbrushing of the individual (male or female) at some later point in the story.

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I honestly don't know if I've improved in any sense, really, but I'll proofread this particular story again soon and maybe work on a next chapter.

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I'd appreciate that.
I try not to read incomplete stories unless I plan on not enjoying them, but I wasn't paying attention when I chose this one.

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I can't promise that I'll make a new chapter soon, but it WILL be on my mind. :twilightsmile:

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