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Vohira


Live long and listen to good music...

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As the newest Princess of Equestria, Twilight Sparkle will have to face many changes and challenges in her new life. However little does she realise that one of the major changes was set in motion a long time ago, as nopony can come out unscathed from a fight with a demigoddess. Now however, days after her coronation Twilight will have to face the consequences. And the decisions she will have to make in the nearest future may very well change Equestria forever.

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AN: Tags may be added. The cover art was made by I-am-knot

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 18 )

Another Nightmare Moon story, and a pretty good start at that. I'm interested to see where this goes. And you're right, there are too few NMM stories for my liking. Hope this one kicks flank as well. :rainbowwild:

If it looks like a did a shotty job, its because I was shadow boxing 'The Rock' possum

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Umm... What comment made no sense whatsoever.

As for the story, pretty well written, noticed a few errors here an there (specifically a little bit about a few words having the wrong tense), aside from that I look forward to see what you plan for us next.

Ok. I'm hooked.

More, if you don't mind.

~Skeeter The Lurker

music that is related.

"Resigned and regretfully" should be "Resigned and regretful"

noticed a coupel other errors, too tired to point them out. Sleep now, maybe more later. Favoriting for funsies.

2821396 I do sometimes wonder how do I miss something like this... Oh well, thanks for pointing it out :raritywink:

2817482 No I do not mind... By the way, nice Aku you have there :pinkiehappy:

YAY! We don't get enough Twi influenced by NMM stories... and if we do.... either they are really bad or waaay to dark. xD
I really like stories that use the manipulative NMM. Have Twilight fall/change... but slowly build back up and have a great conclusion.

Oooooooh... What kind of dirty secrets will stumble upon? I'm excited!

Lemme guess, what's written in there has to be about Nightmare Moon... It's too good to not be true :rainbowwild:

A not so perfect mentor, eh? Self discovery of the darkest kind is quite the sight to see for the first time. I wonder how that glorified pedestal Twilight has Celestia on will fare when she learns of the true history of the times. Ah well, I'm sure she'll get over it. The fun way! :pinkiehappy:

2881519 i believe this one falls into the way to bad catagory:facehoof::ajsleepy:

Sorry my tablet is broken and keeps sending this story to different subjects....I hate my tablet now...

And i'm talking about my group....I apparently sent this story to it three times before i tried to stop it.... Im sorry i sent this to a group...

This chapter needs to be edited but I doubt that will ever happen since the story seems dead. I will bookmark it in hopes it does come back though.

Pity u cancelled this, it was good.

Well it does not have sene Twilight was banished but now is not .

The only thing I COULD OFFER IS JUST A WAY TO TALK WITH TWILIGT .

IF TWILIGHT PINKIE PROMISE THAT FIRST WOULD ASK AND USE DIPLOMACY THEN I COULD SHARE MY OBSERVATIONS .

ONLY FIGHT IF IS NO OTHER CHOICE AND ASK . TO INCAPACITATE ,NOT TO KIL .

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