• Member Since 28th Jul, 2012
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GeodesicDragon

I am a Scotsman who writes stories, not all of which are of the self-insert variety. Books are available again; check my userpage for details.

GeodesicDragon Joined 28th Jul, 2012 · Offline

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Chloe The Great
Chloe The Great #3 · Jun 21st, 2013 · · 1 ·
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I LIKED THE song :derpytongue2:

Lighting Ace
Lighting Ace #4 · Jun 21st, 2013 · · ·
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You know you are doing it good when your partner start to sing, from euphoria

Heresy
Heresy #5 · Jun 27th, 2013 · · ·
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Normally she would use my mouth to pleasure me

lol feletio anyone?

GeodesicDragon
GeodesicDragon #6 · Jun 28th, 2013 · · ·
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2787800

D'oh! That's what I get for not reading the story properly when changing the perspective. :facehoof:

Fixed!

Orion Light
Orion Light #7 · Apr 18th, 2014 · · ·
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Heh heh. Got the title from Californication, huh?:ajsmug:

Daralyn
Daralyn #8 · Feb 11th, 2016 · · ·
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story itself is very nice, especially because it is sort of bonus to larger picture. I never really do clop (or as furry yiff) just for the sake of porn and romance and feelings are very important for me tough... I know this work is already bit older so
hate to be one that breaks it out but have to say few things...
I've noticed that you repeatedly use specific phrases (like tongues wrestling for dominance, lack of oxygen) those should be changed once in a while to make things fresh
yes I know that mutual climax is very erotic element but in reality it is very very rare and work itself then may seems to be bit forced to repetitive ending

on the other hand this is pretty different from that "first" try of clop you've done way back.
hate to be smartass but secret of good erotica is in making the reader to feel like part of the scene, not the watcher

still overall very nice and not a big deal

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