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CountDerpy


She/Her (Trans). Occasional Writer, Storm Chaser, SFM Artist and Former Special Events Staff at Ponyville Ciderfest. PFP by LincolnBrewsterFan.

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why did you had to make the mane 6 vampires i hope you have a different ending than from the movie you beter not have the mane 6 killed
edit: just read it it sounds verry good but why is celestia a vampire ( assuming because of this line:"The only other hint of life in the entire room was a tall white alicorn that stood silently in the darkness just out of view of the lavender unicorn that was still clearing her work space. Her normally beautiful amethyst eyes where dark set and nearly ruby red.
Soon, Twilight. You barely have an idea of what this assignment will truly mean to you, but soon...you will know why.
You will know fear")

Also chapter one sounds familiar to another stories first chapter http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59894/my-little-masquerade

When I watched The Lost Boys I always rooted for the vamps. I hope this story, no matter how brutal the vamps are, favors them over the others. I never understood why (who I considered to be) the bad guys won. I'd even love it if Twilight eventually accepts, then embraces her new form.

And Celestia being a vampony is (forgive the pun) bloody awesome!

Based on Lost Boys? *SQUEE* LOST BOYS!!!!!!! That is one of my all time favorite movie, never saw Tribe but oh well.

BASED ON "THE LOST BOYS"

:yay:

& "THE LOST BOYS: THE TRIBE"

:raritydespair:

2715040 who knows, I might not do that.....but then again I might...also what do you think of :pinkiesmile: and :derpytongue2: being the equivalent of Edgar and Alan Frog respectively
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YS3kYVGMJGY(I like this one better personally):pinkiecrazy:

2715562 it wasn't that good, but it did have some good elements....no pun intended :trollestia:

2715727 I understand, but I am going to go for some parts of The Tribe, but it will mostly be based on the original :moustache:

2715773 I had to think about it, and those two fit quite well. I say go for it.

And no matter how you handle Twilight... please, oh, please, have the vamps as protagonists rather than antagonists. Vamp stories are always (with the obvious unmentionable exception) better that way. And Lost Boys style vamp protags would be so fucking cool.

2715847 well would you mind if all the characters where protagonistic antagonists, that way I can still show the fight between good and evil without actually establishing who is good and who is evil

2715907 Not ideal (for me), really, but certainly better than the Lost Boys model. But no matter how you handle it I'll keep readin'. ...And keep rootin' for the vamps, too.

You get points for the concept, but the presentation is full of grammar and spelling issues that really distract from the story. Tell you what, we'll do a trade. I'll favorite this just to see where it goes, and you'll find yourself an editor, okay?

2716024 sorry its hard to write correctly from a phone...but I will have my editor take a look at it but it may take a while cause he is at camp

2716154 Well first off I can't help but wonder why you aren't on a computer of some sort, but that's alright. If your editor's at camp, you should probably find a different one. I've had problems with the site's mobile version before, but hopefully this link will work.

...Hoofington to find all of the townsfolk either missing or dead with their limbs severed and their throats torn out. Celestia also did not comment on the manner of the deaths...

Seriously? An entire city gets killed and the head of the country doesn't say a peep. That's ridiculo--

Her normally beautiful amethyst eyes where dark set and nearly ruby red.

Oh. She's a vampire too. That explains it.

xTSGx sent me and I have to say I am not disappointed, I'm staying tuned for more.

2721537 I can't wait! your story and one other inspired me to make another story! Its called "Split Personality".:twilightsmile:

2721554 interesting...send me the link when its up and ill read it for sure!

well i hope you won't abandon this story like your rosario inspired fiction

2722149 sure! its actually pending submission as I type :pinkiehappy:

their children and women safe at night,

women

What is this creature?

great can't wait for the next chapter

2730588 thanks ...the next chapter is where the fun begins!

PLEASE IGNORE ALL GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES. WRITING ON THE PHONE IS A PAIN IN THE FLANK. IF YOU WANT TO BE THE EDITOR FOR THIS STORY JUST SEND ME A PM OR SHOOT ME A TXT AT 6052908644

Derpy and Pinkie gonna die! :pinkiecrazy:
Poor Octy... :fluttershysad:

2738982 I Donno....
2739119
Who's to say shes not a pawn?

2739119 The ones who are gonna fall are :pinkiesmile: and :derpytongue2:.

GO VAMPONIES! OCTAVIA MUST BE AVENGED!

2739136 I shall not be swayed, author.

2739379 True. She's not the most... subtle of ponies. :facehoof: She better not screw this up. Thank Faust Celestia is the true head of the 'organization'.

Because Pinkie loves to see ponies smile yet you keep killing them and causing suffering so if she removes you from the equation more ponies smile.:twilightsmile:

2739509 uhhhh.... should I be scared and !!!!run.
2739379>>2739242
Girls you're both pretty now be quiet or ill stake u and feed you to Celestia!
LISTEN TO ME FOR I AM THE SACRED BUDDHA

2739598 I don't really know that is up to pinkie pie.:twilightsmile:

Also
..y has no pony given a damn that Vinyl was brutally murdered??????!!!!

2739603 true but id think thst she will....wait a minute... whats standing behind me!
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2739623 I can't really sympathize with this Vynal, she really could've killed Octavia were she a real pony rather than a vampyre. also You're not supposed to inebriate yourself especially around those you love unless your willing to deal with the consequences of your actions even if it means you murdered them..

2739664 nearly killed octavia and she wasn't a vampire until after that incident ...but you should have some sympathy because she didn't want it to happen (she can't really help but to get drunk shes a dj at a club) and Octavia did come and fuck.her up and kill her violently so....aleast have some heart

Oh lord, this thing's gonna have a high body count, isn't it?

2739686 it'll have a good ammount added to the body count but not as much as my other stories

2739623 Who gives a shit about some pony? They are but F͈͙̭̼̰̗̈́̚͟ͅǑ͚̜̭O̅͐҉̦̭̞̲̻̙̟͕̀D̂̄ͦͮ͏̗̪̤̤.

2739598
Oh, and thanks for calling me pretty but don't tell me to shut up again.
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2739866 you wanna go!
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Just who do you think you are, going around and trying to suck everypony's blood? You should be ashamed of yourselves! Those ponies need that blood to survive, and you're just going to go and TAKE it from them?! That's the height of selfishness! Now go back to your caves and we'll get you some food later, okay? Now go and never let me see you feeding on my friends again! DO YOU UNDERSTAND ME!? Thanks."

2739682 I do have a heart But As a DJ its bad mojo to get during especially when your supposed to be running the set and exploding wubs. MY opinions on the matter is very strict, If you get drunk I believe you should be responsible for whatever you do while inebriated. Even if she was regret ful afterwards It shouldn't have happened in the first place. also Octavia made it even worse by not forgiving her.:facehoof: Basically they were both morally broken. and so It's probably better that this version of the two are both dead.:twilightsmile:

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