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Awsome.
read it later, but i can tell im going to like it, oh and second
This is surprisingly interesting (even if I like vampyre stories too much)
I didn't expect to be able to read it and actually have any flow, and I love the side affects
Tracking this. Will be very interested to see what happens when the euphoria period wears off, and everyone thinks things through.
also, Congrats on the archaic spelling for vampyre. very rarely seen now.
Heresjohnno, I always enjoy using the archaic spellings such as magick, daemons, faeries, and vampyres. And all of you, thanks. I'll be finishing up chapter 3 here as soon as I finish the short story I'm currently writing on. So, stay frosty everypony
374589 Well, I figured I'd add less conventione side-effects of being turned for the sake of being fresh lol. And to those who have favorited, commented, tracked, and liked, thanks for the support. To those who dislike, please leave comments in the future. I'd like to hear what you didn't like about it.
Are you basing your Vampiric Attributes on any particular sources, or are you just making it up as you go?
411733 Some, like photosensitivity and teeth hurting, are kind of (to me) common sense things. Others, like the lust, I just added to spice things up a bit and keep it fresh. Don't want the same stale old side effects, y'know?
Hrrrm. Heavy is skeptical of dis new story. I will eat sandvich and then read it. Hope it's good.
A shoulder mounted chain gun . . . directly linked to the nervous system . . . when one of the more advanced pieces of equipment throughout Equestria is a simple train. If they're so technologically advanced, why haven't they invaded any other country yet?
626790 Civil war is leaving them occupied.
Please tell me youve gave up on the other story I really want to see moar
Wtf happens to rarity are u almost done makeing chapter 3
I've seen this before on fanfiction.net
Are you the original creator,or just putting it on fimfiction to get it more known?
Still holding out for this story.
Can we get even just a 'i'm still working on it' update. something to let us know if the story is dead or not
1183659 I think he died he hasn't been online for seven weeks
831819 Original Creator! And wow this has really grown in popularity since I put it on hiatus! Guess I'll be returning to work on it once I get the file on my laptop~ Chapter 3 is almost done!
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Finally what were ya doing these past months
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Sorry, I've been busy dealing with emotional problems and a whacked-out family, graduation from high school, etc.
Sorry for asking?
This feels rushed at the beginning it dosen't have the same feel as chapter 1&2 not too Mutch info but it's so-so please change it too incomplete
The story lives. Some things felt a bit off such as Celestias instant acceptance of the New Twilight and co. or that everypony is taking the change rather well
still, good to see it update eventually. heres to a quicker part 4.
I get the feeling that the story is going to end up here:
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I've been waiting for this installment for months, I'm glad you didn't stop writing.
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I understand what you mean. I guess I was shooting for something like her not being a hypocrite. Celestia seems to me to be the type to not discriminate.
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Thanks
1398823 oh my god your a telopath you read my mind
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR please
and fast suspense is killing me I'm not trying to rush you I'm just excited
1398823 That's currently my desktop background.
1437446 mine currrently is the close up shot of Tzimishy.
Pinkie would make a great Malkavian, she already has most of the Disciplines as canon.
1437845 The question is did the Malkavians embrace Pinkie or did Pinkie embrace the Malkavians?
1440078 Those are the questions that keep me up at night
Well, new cover art raises as many questions as it answers. Feed my dear Applebloom, Feed
1398823 if someone ever made a crossover of vampire:the masquerade and MLP:FiM it would be awesome
1479837 World of Darkness has some kickass games. And regrettably, I'm currently unable to write, as my uncle shot himself a few days ago... Sorry.
so hows the writeing going
Ugh, the mediocrity, it burns! Prepare for some harsh words. I'm probably going to be a little too brutal with my honesty, as I tend to be a little overly dramatic when I post comments online. I just thought you should know why I felt the need to give this a thumbs-down. The plot is rushed and the emotional scenes are generic and flat, especially the clop. In fact, the clop is so bland that it almost isn't worth the Mature tag. Almost. You might as well just remove it entirely and make this a Teen-rated fic.
And Zecora's lines... Do you even know what the word "rhyming" means? The last time I checked, "days" and "place" do not rhyme. Not even close. Okay, maybe that was a bit harsh of me to say, but still, the point remains that you tried to rhyme, but failed completely.
This story does have its positives, though. The spelling and grammar are impeccable. I can't find a single thing wrong with it. I respect those with strong grammar skills. However, I do suggest that you put a little more space between paragraphs. It's not technically an error, but it will make this look more professional, and it's easier on the eyes.
I also find the premise to be very interesting. I just wish it had been executed more skillfully.
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More like a rainbow orgasim
What would the side-effects the stallions would go through when they get turned be? The story doesn't say so far.
Dear lord above I. LOVE. THIS. FIC please update soon it hilarious
Ugh, fucking writer's block, guys and gals. Sorry, this always happens to me. I get so far into writing and hit a hard, thick wall. I'm trying to muscle through it, so bear with me.
1747037 While I appreciate the honesty, criticism is essentially useless if you do not provide tips on how to improve. I'm sorry you didn't like my first fanfic, but saying things such as "the emotional scenes are generic and flat, especially the clop" doesn't give me anything to run with for improvement. The least you could do is tell me how I could make it LESS bland and generic, so as to make it a better read.
Again, I appreciate the honesty. I'd much rather you be honest and give it a thumbs-down than lie and say you love it.
1759727 We'll get into that in a later chapter.
1753574 First off, orgasm is how it is spelled. Second, holy shit I laughed way harder than I should have.
Ok :)
2162088 I didn't give any tips on the emotional aspects because I don't really have much experience in that area, either. I'm not a very emotional person. All my stories are either spoofs or don't require the level of emotion that this fic calls for. And none of them have clop. I don't know how to do it right; I can only point out when it's not done right.
2162124 I see. Well, just something to think about in the future. Again, thank you for being civil about it. I've had some REALLY unnecessarily nasty remarks on my other story, so it's nice to see people on the interwebs can be polite about not liking something. For the record, I don't think your critique was brutal, merely you being honest.
2162181 Thank you. I've found that whenever I try being polite about my critique, people get upset. Brutal honesty like this tends to get a better reaction, for some reason.
2224748 If you are looking for an idea, then my suggestion would be to explore the negative side to the Vampony transformation. Twilight tries to do something normal only to find that she can't concentrate as her thirst is distracting, or that a now vampony Scootaloo goes berserk and bites Applebloom and Sweetie Belle against their wills. Something to really hammer home that they are now bloodsuckers beyond the killing of Gilda.
Everypony still seems to be in the euphoria stage and adding in some downsides will help to ground the characters.
2273589 You actually read my mind regarding the CMC
This is a good idea. At some point, I'm also tossing around Apollyon and Lilith killing Shining Armor and leaving his body for the mane six to find. This serves to possibly push them further into darkness, as is the demon siblings' plan.
cool story.
like the story bro, hooves up from me. Also you should keep writing, and talk about scootaloo and her friends getting turned, thatle be a cool half-a-chapter, the rest could be about the rest of the main characters going at it, feeding and fun.
will you ever up date the story
Hey, guys. Sorry there's nothing so far. The story isn't dead, I'm just without a reliable computer. My grandpa's (who I'm living with) is from 2003, so typing on it is out, and I can't afford a new computer.