Hehehehe...Shindig Armor....

2712054 Hehe updated it....damn phone

why did you had to make the mane 6 vampires i hope you have a different ending than from the movie you beter not have the mane 6 killed
edit: just read it it sounds verry good but why is celestia a vampire ( assuming because of this line:"The only other hint of life in the entire room was a tall white alicorn that stood silently in the darkness just out of view of the lavender unicorn that was still clearing her work space. Her normally beautiful amethyst eyes where dark set and nearly ruby red.
Soon, Twilight. You barely have an idea of what this assignment will truly mean to you, but soon...you will know why.
You will know fear")

Also chapter one sounds familiar to another stories first chapter http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59894/my-little-masquerade

2712849 you see how it plays out ^^

When I watched The Lost Boys I always rooted for the vamps. I hope this story, no matter how brutal the vamps are, favors them over the others. I never understood why (who I considered to be) the bad guys won. I'd even love it if Twilight eventually accepts, then embraces her new form.

And Celestia being a vampony is (forgive the pun) bloody awesome!

Based on Lost Boys? *SQUEE* LOST BOYS!!!!!!! That is one of my all time favorite movie, never saw Tribe but oh well.

BASED ON "THE LOST BOYS"

& "THE LOST BOYS: THE TRIBE"

2715040 who knows, I might not do that.....but then again I might...also what do you think of and being the equivalent of Edgar and Alan Frog respectively
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YS3kYVGMJGY(I like this one better personally)

2715562 it wasn't that good, but it did have some good elements....no pun intended

2715727 I understand, but I am going to go for some parts of The Tribe, but it will mostly be based on the original

2715773 I had to think about it, and those two fit quite well. I say go for it.

And no matter how you handle Twilight... please, oh, please, have the vamps as protagonists rather than antagonists. Vamp stories are always (with the obvious unmentionable exception) better that way. And Lost Boys style vamp protags would be so fucking cool.

2715847 well would you mind if all the characters where protagonistic antagonists, that way I can still show the fight between good and evil without actually establishing who is good and who is evil

2715907 Not ideal (for me), really, but certainly better than the Lost Boys model. But no matter how you handle it I'll keep readin'. ...And keep rootin' for the vamps, too.

2715965 eheeh ok just keep rooting for them:

You get points for the concept, but the presentation is full of grammar and spelling issues that really distract from the story. Tell you what, we'll do a trade. I'll favorite this just to see where it goes, and you'll find yourself an editor, okay?

2716024 sorry its hard to write correctly from a phone...but I will have my editor take a look at it but it may take a while cause he is at camp

2716154 Well first off I can't help but wonder why you aren't on a computer of some sort, but that's alright. If your editor's at camp, you should probably find a different one. I've had problems with the site's mobile version before, but hopefully this link will work.

...Hoofington to find all of the townsfolk either missing or dead with their limbs severed and their throats torn out. Celestia also did not comment on the manner of the deaths...

Seriously? An entire city gets killed and the head of the country doesn't say a peep. That's ridiculo--

Her normally beautiful amethyst eyes where dark set and nearly ruby red.

Oh. She's a vampire too. That explains it.

2719311 thanks!

2719741
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whens the next chapter?!

xTSGx sent me and I have to say I am not disappointed, I'm staying tuned for more.

2720481 soon
2720649 thanks

2721537 I can't wait! your story and one other inspired me to make another story! Its called "Split Personality".

2721554 interesting...send me the link when its up and ill read it for sure!

well i hope you won't abandon this story like your rosario inspired fiction

2722149 sure! its actually pending submission as I type

2723401 Mycenae

2724139 yup its up now :P

their children and women safe at night,

women

What is this creature?

2724605

YOU DARE QUESTION ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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great can't wait for the next chapter

2730588 thanks ...the next chapter is where the fun begins!

PLEASE IGNORE ALL GRAMMAR AND SPELLING MISTAKES. WRITING ON THE PHONE IS A PAIN IN THE FLANK. IF YOU WANT TO BE THE EDITOR FOR THIS STORY JUST SEND ME A PM OR SHOOT ME A TXT AT 6052908644

2724630
You have earned a whole new level of respect and fear from me with this post.

2719778 creepy pic ,but cool at the same time.

2724630 even creepier picture.

Twilight is probably my favorite if most innocent protagonist here.

Twilight set down her feather quill, the desk in front of her littered with several books, a few rolls of parchment, and several empty ink pots scattered across the cherry wood surface. She had just spent the last several hours researching the topic Princess Celestia had assigned her small Equestrian Mythology class for their Nightmare Night projects. She had been lucky enough to have gotten to research a topic she has had some familiarity with the Vampony. She had been a fan of the Starlight Saga since it came out three years ago, but she was not so happy to find that Equestria's most historical Vamponies where not as sparkly and a lot more....bloody. It was kind of refreshing to see that she would not be going as Starlight Sawn for Nightmare Night, as per the assignment they have to dress as one of the creatures they researched.

No twilight your a cool character don't
say that crap