Talented bounty hunter Rainbow Dash has hit a bit of a snag in her career, and she finds herself in over her head once she accepts her next assignment. Not only must she enter the dangerous F-Zero races, but she has to place first to win the Champion's Belt! Will her guts and luck be enough to become an F-Zero champion?
You, my good sir, officially win for making an MLP/F-Zero crossover. Also, you kept it in good spirits by having Rainbow Dash play as the awesome Captain Falcon (He's not my favorite F-Zero Character though. Dr. Stewart, James McCloud and Phoenix rank higher than him). This chapter has great pacing as well.
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It's funny you bring up Dr. Stewart and James McCloud, as they both show up later on. As for Phoenix, I'm still not sure what it is I want to do with him, so he may have zero direct impact on the plot.
Oh well. Time to hit the story bible and start arranging stuff. Thanks for reading!
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Yeah I honestly couldn't see Phoenix being in this particular plot because it would be random. But the reason I like those three is because I appreciate the Golden Fox's boost, Little Wyvern can hit very fast speeds due to the nature of its boosts, and Rainbow Phoenix was the first machine I beat all the Master Class Cups with.
Anyways, I'm keeping a keen eye on this fic.
You love those song references don't ya. Also liking the setting so far. one almost forgets that outside racing F-Zero dose have vast world to for storytelling. Thought I'm wondering will the story cover the fact F-zero and Star Fox Somewhat share the same universe? I mean the company that made the G-diffusers in Arwing used the same tech in the F-zero racing machines. That and all the nodes to each other in the games. (James Mccloud,Octoman,That one ending in Star Fox command)
Beautifully written chapter. I loved the interactions between Rainbow Dash an Scoots since it felt like a natural conversation between an adult and a teen going through some problems. I honestly like how you wrote Gilda here. I'm glad you gave her Samurai Goroh's character to cover some of her undesirable traits (on top of making the most sense). Can't wait for the next chapter.
FALCON BUCK!!!
Awesome, Twilight Sparkle is Dr. Stewart. Very fitting character match actually.
Also, Prince Blueblood isn't a total hobknocker here. I like that.
I still have the videogame F-Zero for My SNES.
I have to say that I didn't expect Applejack to be James McCloud. I really want to know more about why Twilight was crying though but this is starting to get real interesting. That test was annoying, but I'm glad Rainbow Dash could ace the test drive portion (Then again, she's Rainbow Dash based off of Captain Falcon). Great fic so far and very well needed.
Also, for future references, something tells me that Fluttershy would be Jody Summers?
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Fluttershy's identity's gonna blow your mind, so I'll save it a secret for now.
As for AJ being James McCloud, I figured, you know, since he's all about his family...
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I'll look forward to it.
4249387 I still have, and play, F-Zero X for my N64. Gotta love the classics, right?
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Will this ever be continued?
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I've kinda moved on from fan fiction, tbh.
But I might continue writing someday.
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I see.
In that case, you might want to change the status tag.