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"For fun" is the best reason to do anything. "The best" is the best way to do everything.

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The mighty Griffon Empire is no more.

Centaurs rule the land.

Many face death, but some have a reason to live.

Created for the World-Building Alliance's May Writing Prompt.

Prequel/Side-story to Sonata de Equestria

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

You should add this to the Griffon Kingdom group, you might get more readers that way.

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True enough, even though it would have been easy for you to do it yourself. :ajsmug:

Interesting, I liked it. Though I'm interested in why you'd make Charcoal a silent protagonist. I'll follow it.

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Though I'm interested in why you'd make Charcoal a silent protagonist.

Basically, I was about a thousand words in when I realized that he hadn't spoken a single word. I then decided to challenge myself a little; see if I couldn't relate his character by his actions and what he was feeling alone.

Come to think of it, I've done the silent protagonist thing before, but in a comedy... This would be my first time attempting the style with any sort of seriousness.

In other words: For Fun! :pinkiehappy:

I'll follow it.

Thank you kindly! :raritystarry:

If you'll excuse some minor advertisement: this story's pretty complete, but it is a side story to my larger tale...

Are any of the centaurs named Tirek?

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Just the main one.:pinkiehappy:

Despite the dark and dad tags, I found the story quote uplifting arty the end. Great building of characters, even those appearing just for a few seconds. Plus, I'm always down on good griffon stories, can't get enough of the cat-butted bundles of awesomeness.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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Despite the dark and dad tags, I found the story quote uplifting arty the end.

Dark stories are really only worth it for me if they have that sort of ending. A victory makes the darkness mean something, it makes it something to be overcome.

Great building of characters, even those appearing just for a few seconds. Plus, I'm always down on good griffon stories, can't get enough of the cat-butted bundles of awesomeness.

Thank you! I've got a planet-sized soft-spot for the critters myself. I haven't gotten tired of them yet!

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