Hi everyone,

Chapter 14 has finally reached a point where I don't think its too awful to post.

I just needed to get it done so that I could move on with the story. And hopefully not get bogged down like this in the future.

I have some plans for Chapter 15 (as well as for the rest of the book), so it should go a bit smoother as I incorporate those plans and set things in motion for the finale.

Stay tuned and thank you so very much for your patience.