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TWO TICKETS TO PARADISE!
:ASSPLOSION:
I can swim?! MA, I CAN SWIM NOW! 8D
>Blue Elephant
>Red Donkey
>White Eagle
I see what you did there.
Good job.
Great chapter brother cannot wait for more of this keep it up
2493630 Care to explain? I no get referenceseses.
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The animals in question are the Elephant, Donkey, and Eagle. The three animals used to represent America -- the first two are party symbols, while the last is used for the nation itself.
And the colors, well... maybe if I re-ordered them. Red, White, and Blue. America's "colors". Typically, the Elephant is used to associate with Republicans(red), while the Donkey is used to associate with the Democrats(blue). It seems a little odd for a reversal of color, but I still caught what was up. Unless it's a coincidence, then the three animals and colors are meant to represent America.
2493675 oohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... Now it makes sense. I couldn't brain, I have the dumb. Political technicalities are not my strong point.
Hmmm... never read a fic with me and Daring Do... interesting design, I think i'm gonna love this.
Awesome story, please write FASTURR!!:D
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I myself carry a survival tin with me at all times.
Paradise only lasts for so long.
Brilliant American politics reference by the way.
*is happy* (short, sweet, and to the point)
On a side note, I'm having trouble figuring out what Do's voice sounds like. I think I'll have to re-watch Read it and Weep for clues, and if that fails, I shall assume a Rainbow Dash-esque voice. My mind was trolling me earlier in the chapter by making Do sound like Freiza.
Edit:
Problem Solved
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ejtxmpnke0xnxsa/Daring_Do_voice_samples.opus
(Opus audio files are playable in the newest versions of Firefox, as well as VLC and and some other programs.)
you know what's scary?
"me" in the story...is almost exactly like "me" irl....though irl "me" is a little bit more laid back and "no fucks given" then story "me"
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Well, I also have a kukri, but I can't carry that everywhere I go.
This is definitely a love-hate relationship in this story. If I was keeping score on the nice things they did for each other, I would say that the score card is now even at the moment.
Good stuff. Looking forward for more!
Can't wait for the food discussion.
Reading this and then I hear Paradise City on the radio exactly at the right moment
HAKUNA MATATA! WHAT A WONDERFUL PHRASE!
Love the relationship Daring and "I" share thus far. Glad I at least have the good sense to patch her injury up. Sucks about the supplies, though. I have a feeling things are going to get dicey in a little bit...
HOUSTON I HAVE ESTABLISHED A CONNECTION.
Murica. Fuck yeah.
Interesting. Please give me some of my memories back! When I touch an idol or something it unlocks a piece of my mind?
Anything!
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2493688 I wasn't thinking it either. I try not to combine politics and ponies, makes for a bad combination.
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You goddamn hilarious son of a bitch.
2495433I ONLY WISHED TO ENTERTAIN!
thank you, mentlegen
2493675'MURIKA!
murica!
Good sir, you leave me with an interesting quandary. I came to your story expecting to find some shallow Daring Do clop, and that would be all. Noticing, as the first chapter neared its end, that this might go on for a while before it delivered on its Romance tag, I sat back and waited for the first thing that might bring the protagonists closer. Instead, they got off on one of the worst possible footings. It's like you've said, "Writing a compelling adventure-romance in a scoffed genre (HiE) is too easy, so I'll make one of them hate the other for starters." I wish you luck with the challenge you've set yourself.
I don't feel like enough has happened to really warrant a rating, nor am I sure if this is going to go in a direction worth following. However, your basic writing competency shows that there is hope of both accruing a positive rating and a favorite in the future, so this stays open in a tab.
Don't cock it up.
Well, I'd have to say that all went well. Considering the fact I have absolutely no idea who I am nor who you are.
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Dad, i didnt need a telescope to see that.
Republicans are red Elephants.
Democrats are Blue Mules.
Just thiught I threw that out. Everything else seems pretty fucking worth awaiting non patiently for future chapters to come and shit brah.
Quite the story you have there, it'll be nice to see this kind of dialogue with almost every character by the human, not just the exceptional few against the unpopular characters. This fanfic deserves my attention. Well done with the story so far, I hope the pacing remains constant, as well as character development. Keep up the good work man.
to everyone talking about how the colours are switched,
didn't the parties switch color schemes or something in the 1800's?
...I'm I the only who's not American?
2499753 I'm not either you're not alone bud
great story cant wait for next chapter not all clop and a good plot. heh see what i did there
2496148 best video ever
'MERICA!
... I am getting the subtle impression that this guy is near a complete, moralist asshole.
Not completely, but he is cutting it dangerously close. If I were Daring, I would have "accidentally" tripped him so he would be impaled by a spikey doom.
Ya I'm feeling horrible for Daring. If it was me I would have left him feeling that I was doing him a favor. If I kept my promise to that asshole I would probably kill him. Daring is a lot more patient then I would ever be.
His epic quest for his house is like the equivalent of "Dude, where's my car?!"
I'm liking it. Interesting setting, funny narrating and good character interaction. I say, very fine indeed Do carry on.
Me thinks you mean "temporary", unless you intended to imply that Daring's hatred of... I just refuse to call him anonymous... the Protagonist, transcends space and time.
both Do an 'me' come very childish in the dialog.
This guy is a dumbass.
So apparently I am too :)
...This is different than when I edited it.
I wish I was in this situation, this sounds like it would be tits! :D
Nice job man, nice job!
Loving how this is going!
You and Daring have been walking for hours now.
I. DONT. FUCKING. WALK. ANYWHERE
I can just see myself walking through the jungle, fedora and all, with my trusty companion Daring to keep me company....until I die, probably on the first trap. Oh well.
Also, I wouldn't take my shirt off in a rainforest. I'd get a nasty sunburn.