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cute, thought the 'Archeologist' wa going ta hurt her, lycky he was a good guy.
So, Daring got her Cutie Mark, which is pretty much exploring, by attempting to steal something from someone? Well, okay then.
Not that it wasn't a bad idea – quite the contrary, it fits with how you characterize her – but there's something bugging me...
Do any of us really know anything?
I saw this new chapter, and I was like EMERGID!!!
Well, I just finished rereading this, turned on my WiFi, and poof. New chapter. No complaints here.
Well, from regular robbery to grave robing, daring is talented in all
Just one thing. "Praise Jesus."
An amnesiac would not know who or what a "Jesus" is or any other specific colloquialism like that.
4317844 He's starting to remember, but not realizing it. Kind of like with the movies.
fucking awesome!! Love this story :D
Lucas and Speilberg... You sneaky, reference making bastard.
MISTER SPIELBERG.
pretty cool
Yeah, sure, Anon-san. You just want to look at her cutie mark again. (Among other things...)
Subtle, very subtle in your references
Huh...Okay, yeah, that was cool
Was that a "Young Indiana Jones" reference? No......."The Last Crusade" reference? With obvious differences.
Yeah!! Another! chapter
4318777 What? Daring has nice flanks.
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Wow... Just... Wow... There was nothing about that that was necessary. Scatman took the effort to write this for us and you disregard the whole thing because it's "headcanon" and then post that no chapter was submitted.
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I've missed you so much
Nice, "The Last Crusade" referent dude.
Why would ponies have the phrase "pretty Penny" when they don't have pennies or have a Star of David at all?
Heh, wonder if she ever got the star back, like Indy did in Crusade.
Last Crusade opening reference: Check.
Daring showing more of her feelings to him: Check.
Anon becoming more comfortable with her touching him: Check.
I sense all these feelings are coming to a climax. Now it's only a matter of time...
You sir are doing an excellent job with the telling of this tale. Please I eagerly await the next installment of this story!
Btw when is Daring going to be fighting the huge bald nazi dude (stallion/whatever) by the dual prop flying wing airplane (or airship in the instance) while anon is trapped inside the rear gun turret?
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I figured Jay would keep calling her a thief after hearing her cutie mark story. Some things never change, at least Daring has grown used to this teasing. Looks like it'll be smooth sailing for a while, because Indiana had to run away from Nazis and get out of this blimp because they made it turn around.
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That was a dick thing to say, and I apologize for saying it.
I posted that with 2 days no sleep, so I have no idea why I said it. I just woke up and saw that I said that when you replied and had no idea that I DID say it. Sorry.
Lucas...
Spielberg....
Fedora-jacket pony....
Welcome.... Mr. Anderson
Yes! Update!
The only 'problem' with this chapter is that eight-year-old Daring slips into adult Daring speech in about a paragraph or two and then gets stuck. Other than that it was as excellent as ever.
I like this story a lot. The 2nd person is very immersive and the lack of 'choose your path' questions keep the story very steady. Though there are a few pacing issues but they are easily ignorable as they are simple jumps that seem more natural than written(that might be what you were going for?) I am a great fan of adventure and a GOOD adventure story is a rare thing here. The background information that you thought of(such as the cutie mark story) are very creative and fit the character. I personally enjoy the mature hints and themes throughout the story as they're what happens in the real world, but most authors avoid the subject, thank you for not being one of those authors. I feel like I am truly tracking with Daring Do and that is a great achievement. Not grammar issues, no spelling issues, but one thing I don't like is how laid back the actions scenes feel. I never really tense up during these scenes, they're short and lack the detail to make me afraid of death or pain. The hook in back scene was the only one that made me flinch but the rest seem...lax. Anyway, I can not wait for your next installment, and I will defiantly be checking out you other stories.
Sincerely, Entrinity, dimension traveler, adventure extraordinaire. 8.7/10
Glad to see you've updated. This story remains very cute. I eagerly await more, it's definitely one of my favorites.
Ermahgerrd. Yerrs.
I am not getting the Bible references. Doesn't really seem to fit with the world.
it is strainge how this is the second highest rated fick in the clopfic groups romantic folder. and it dosent even contain any clop yeat
I think you're using too many human names and references. It kinda drags the reader from the feeling like he's the only human in Equestia, might want to check on that buddy. The human in the story I mean.
Holy damn ass shit fuck that filly! She got balls!
feels like a filler chapter to me. Sorry.
"In a world were scatman updates his stories"
Can't wait for an update.
this is good so far keep up the good work
Hey I was looking and this story is the second highest liked daring do story on fimfiction congrats. And I honestly think you can get rid of the sex tag and just say at the beginning of the chapter "warning contains sexual themes" unless of course you intend to include a sex chapter. Also I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! He just needs to kiss daring do already lol. I love the awkward situations though keep it up.
That story was indeed cool, and completely believable. This fic is just as great as ever.
Most excellent.
Pls Continue this, I need more Daring in my life!
This fic is long and I enjoy it... have a fav so that my ancient memory will not forget this.
This is really good! I hope it updates soon!
Literally this is my favorite story I've ever read. And not to be dramatic or anything, if this story doesn't continue, I don't know if I can continue. Lol. ~
Excellent story dude! Keep it up!