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Damn't were the hell the sex at!?
Don't worry about delays or short chapters. Just keep not being dead and we're going to love everything you put out.
Wow, what perfect timing, I was just hoping something I wanted to read would update, and low and behold this does. Rather slow chapter, but a nice amount of inner-thoughts from Jay to give us a better idea of how he thinks.
3894720 Kekekekekeke, this is a relatively slow-paced story, so I don't think it's going to happen for a little while. "Line removed because I'm a derp who gets different fanfics confused"
3894720 Just wait bit will ya, it'll happen soon enough and it will be fatastic!
*3 ICH updates and 1 story released, no "This Magic Moment" update*
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And yes, I know it will update "soon" *edit and by soon I mean right now
Aw now your just screwing with us.
-edit and now I love you.
What can I say, it's still got that good ol' time adventure serial feeling from beginning to end Scatman.
It's a nice little update and I'm happy to hear who we're up against. In particular, still all too happy to hear there's more of Leutnant Von Ribbontrot's lot around as they're always tops in the scale of literary villains. It's a nice smooth flight, a nice smooth read, and it makes me feel happy by the end of it.
Pull a Daring and stay classy no matter what anyone says mate! Thanks again, and I shall be ever waiting for the next chapter regardless of how long it takes.
Just one little teensy thing: “Camels are known for being weak a dumb” for review purposes only.
3894720 Heh... don't worry I am sure they are warming up to each other. Just need that critical point where the both of them find common ground. Personally I like when there's a story and not sex for the simple point of rutting her till shes pops. Nice update man! Honestly if you are following what I think you are I feel I know where this is going.
Best night ever!
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That's all you're here for...
I lost a game of Fim-Fic roulette but so far I ain't complaining.
3894938 And your point is?
3894951
You need to get your priorities straight, mate.
3894974 I have needs!!!!!
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Then, I don't know, Go look at normal NSFW stuff...
Jesus...
A super amazing adventure romance fic updates and all people can do is complain there's no sex. Shame on you guys. This is a great story here. If there is sexual scenes... Well. OK then. But this is a great fanfic! You guys just Need to enjoy how much quality of character development is getting put into this story to make every moment meaningful, if you guys want to see instant sex scenes go somewhere else.. Don't rib this author ceaselessly. He'll get to that stuff eventually. But personally this fic has much more value beyond a clop fic.
Comment.
You like comments, don't you?
Comments? What is a "comment"?
I shall comment in the comments section so you can read my comment and comment on it, because you like my comments. That is why I'm commenting.
Also, nice update.
Oops ...
You must update more you fantastic bastard! I keep throwing words at my screen but the updates don't go faster. Instead I just make weird comments about bastards being fantastic. Boy this took an unexpected turn.
Well this was a nice treat for my morning :P Keep up the good work dude.
3894720 Clops eh?
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Just because there is a "Sex" tag doesn't mean fiction itself supposed to be clopfic
3895774 It's funny how one comment can make everybody freak out about it. I so trollestia all of you into commenting on my comment! Damn hate to comment on something that I was really trying to comment about.
Awww, nothing says bonding more than sleeping in somebodys lap while their scratch your back.
lol pony nazis
3894720 LOL...
remember when Daring and Jay were inside the last city... the one where they were staying with the crazy camal? there was DEFINNITELY clop in that chapter. remember? There was an occupied room next door that made the situation all weird for Daring and Jay?
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But I also agree, where is the sex? apparently Daring wants it to happen as well, just look for her reaction during that same chapter near the end. xD
3896218 Well well well where have you been?
3896231 lol, what you mean? Other than sleeping? Well, I been at home or school! xD
But if your talking about story wise, im updating... xD
Oh those wackey nazis...
3896244 Good I hate to egg your house!
3894720 It will happen eventually So just calm your blue balls down Okay.
Clop is done better with a story anyways.
3896264 Funny you didn't see the the other comment I made there mister!
3896281 All well. Not like I care anyways I've been up for 2 days straight I am too tired to care right now. Anyways I only responded to the comment because I thought that it would be fun to gauge your reaction.
An update?!? 'Rubs eyes' AN UPDATE!!!!!
Also why do you guys want clop?
Mr scat if you make clop please do it in like a separate story ( like a ICH sex times story) some of us don't want random clop in our stories, or at least warn us in the title!
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...Oh my.
Well, now I know what kind of fetish you have...
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>Mature · Sex tags on story
>Summary has the following warning on it: "Don't be afraid of the "sex" tag. This is not solely a clop fic, but it does contain clop at some points. Also contains adult language, so if you don't like that, then switch the "mature" box off. Simple stuff."
>Both said tags and warning have been there since the very first chapter
>Ergo, there was a completely premeditated plan for "clop" material from the beginning, so it is not random whatsoever
You're claiming that you didn't sign up to get exactly what was written on the box from the beginning...
...What are you even doing here?
3896579 They make it so easy!
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Of course they do, sweetie. This was all planned by you ahead of time.
1.
Riding a zeppelin.2.
Thinking this is the easiest part of a trip.3. Beating a crap out off henchmen.
4. escape a falling/burning Zeppelin.
Major Toht the Pony. :D
3896579 "Comment cleared because I'm a derp that get's different fics confused."
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...When did that happen? I don't remember that.
3898970 Ugh, do you know what happens when someone is currently following/reading about 5 different Daring Do + Human companion stories at the same time? You get them mixed up. IN this instance, I got this story mixed up with a different one. The confusion came from the fact that in both this story and the other one, Daring and her human companion get captured by Zebra's early on in the story. In this one they get tortured, and in the other the Human gets sold as a slave (or at least they try to) and Daring get raped by one or more of the Zebras (never made clear, as they human saved her without seeing much of anything himself). The story I got it confused with is Hybrid, both of them hadn't updated for a while, so when both of them updated within a weeks of each other, my mind mucked them up.
I was very happy to see an update to this story. It's more than simple clop. Though I can't wait for the big moment. They're gonna rut all night long. LOL. Poor Jay doesn't know what he's getting himself into.
3896649 You'll never know will you!
Why do I get the feeling that the drink was poisoned? That was my first thought when that waiter brought the drink so quickly. Great chapter though!
I just got a thought about these idols. They are suppose to be an elephant, a donkey and an eagle. They are also in the color blue, red and white. I smell America.
I always enjoy seeing an update for this story, no matter how short! So excited for this story!
3900330 Fuck Yeah
I may have forgotten about some *five* updates for this story and realised with this update...
On the bright side, I got to read five chapters in a row.
I can't help but imagine that scratching Daring's Back would be pretty relaxing, that I'll probably sleep for real. It must look a bit odd for other ponies to see that, but now I forgot how big she is. ^^; Basically is her head at Jay's chest or shoulder?