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And they told me staying up late gives me nothing. I got a new chapter, they can suck it!
At this point if I was him I would be broken mentally. Having my only friend abandon me (I'm still confused about that)
And also. YAY UPDATE!
Well, I definitely wasn't expecting that.
Oh wait a nazi xenophile? Don't Nazi's only like racial purity?
*tilt head*
Hmmmm....What are you up to, Daring?
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Jay's reaction when he remembers what they are supposed to be:
I know that this is an elaborate ruse from Daring, but i hope Jay hatefucks the shit out of her when they get back together.
But...if this ends with Aryanne, it would be even better. IMHO
How much could they hate possibly hate her?
How much could they possibly hate her?
Aryanne, sweet!
Aryanne, flirting
Friggn AWESOME!
HUZZAH IT IS ALIVE
Cool, a chapter! This story is worth waiting for
I pause in my writing to read this. I am pleased and confused...is this possible?
This guy and Aryanne please. Fuck Daring
Aaaaaah, most glorious update!
Now, Daring have one less enemy to worry about, that's good,
she did however ask a bunch of nazi ponys to kill him, and that's bad,
However now she and Jay are safe and that's good!
But she did sell out the statues and her friend to said nazi ponys and that's bad,
but Jay did get some sweet tounge action from two pretty mares and that's good!
But now Jay is under the Hoof of a bunch of facist ponys that seem to have some grand plans for him and that's bad.
All in all........it's been one confusing day for our biped hero.
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I know what you mean. I have been up all night and half the day working on my stories latest chapter. Headaches, hunger, and more pains during the chapters work but I did it...
I don't even know who's using who any more.
Didn't you know, Jay? Aryanne is a Scanner:
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Fucking Nazis, always end up being helpful... Some how.
Didn't expect that.
Loved it.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
i like the indiana jones inspiration but if i see aliens i will find you and punch you.
God, I hope Daring's playing the long game here. Pit two of her enemies against each other, then screw over the last one standing. I just hope that was a tactical retreat and not a full withdraw on her end. If she actually betrayed Jay I don't know if my heart could take that kind of abuse.
Also, Jay needs to get some answers before he reenacts that scene from Scanners... you know the one.
Kill off Daring, traitors deserve to die tbh lad
Aww say it isn't so! Daring don't leave Jay hanging! I really don't like that nazi mare whatever her damn name is. Hopefully this will turn out for the best.
This needs to be updated right fuckin' quick! Goddamn that was a bitch of a cliffhanger.
I'm honestly waiting for him to just crack the shits with everyone and go off and do his own thing. He's WAY to forgiving and it's kinda putting me off the story a bit
Poor jay good chapters can't wait for the next one and will come back and say him and will they fall in love
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You know how much of a bitch your former friend /love interest is when a Nazi is more likeable than her.
Daring, good news! The Nazis are here to save us!
Daring's up to something, no doubts about that.
Roll credits
your?
your?!
YOUR?!
GRAMMAR NAZIS ASSEMBLE !
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Good God, you actually did it.
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On another note. Aryanne is best Nazi poni.
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I hope Jay fucks Aryanne, HARD! Then when daring comes back all hot and bothered he's like "na I'm good". Daring flips out in a mad rant about him being ungrateful. Jay replies "You should try being nice for once ... the Nazi pony was nice".
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This is unfortunately the norm for second person stories, and why I dislike the genre. "You" is almost always a nonentity in the story world having things happen to/around them while ultimately contributing little if anything to the advancement of the plot. It is extremely aggravating and a major down mark on otherwise great stories like this story and the work of Getmeoutofhere. In my opinion at least.
Superheat the cerebrospinal fluid. Pop! (Don't ask me how I know this.)
If I were in Jay's place, the only thing Daring would be getting from me after all this is a kick in the teeth.
Daring dropping the name of the story made me squee a bit harder than I should have.
I like this story for a very simple reason. It's one of like 5 stories with the human tag on this website that isn't the exact freaking same story with minor details altered. It's actually not *gasp* predictable, or at least not THAT predictable. I actually feel "suspense" and "surprise" occasionally. Which is more than I can say about the "Angry human shows how badass he is by playing Pony Puncher Extreme until ponies either love him or fear him purely to fulfill the author's power fantasy." stories that are a dime of dozen on this site.
So yeah, you get points for actually trying to write a unique narrative. I also like that while Daring acts like a douche, she has "depth" to her character, more than she would if she just acted all giddy and nice around Mr.Human like in every other story.
One thing that did kind of make me do a double-take though was the inclusion of a fanbase OC in a story that otherwise seems to avoid fan cliches and other fan ideas... Although given Aryanne is overall one of the more interesting fan characters to come out of the fanbase (and kind of fits in with the whole Daring is Indiana Jones thing anyway), I'm thinking it doesn't really detract from the story in any way.
The human becoming a sex slave to Aryanne. I like this! Please have them have sex!
Hope Daring Comes Back. Believe It Or Not She Was My Favorite Character.
Yeah this is gettin pretty good. I was wondering why Daring was being so passive-aggressive this whole story. I suppose if you read back you could always tell what her intentions were. she always "put up" with the "You" of the story rather than, well, treating "you" like a human being. Using the false promises and all, I'm just surprised I went with it that long. Usually you can sniff out this sort of thing, but this is good, it really is differing Daring from Indiana Jones. In that where Indi, does the right thing, Daring MIGHT just be in it for the money. There's no way to know for sure yet, it would be optimistic to assume she's just buying time, but that would make it a double twist. In which case, you've done your job, you've left me unsure and waiting to see.
There were a lot of good things to this chapter, enjoyed it thoroughly. Also, the damn Nazis have showed up for "you" and use him for their experiments. Clearly they intend to placate "you" with clop until they can finish whatever it is they're doing. Or... meh, no fun to theorize about THAT sort of thing. BUT, then again, there's a lot of daring talking out of her ass here, so... It's all in the air, I guess we'll see if it's worth the wait for the next chapter.
Your dirty what?
FUCK EVEN THE NAZI CAN'T GRAMMAR!!!!
Wow
I can't even think at this point, I'll pray to any god now for the next chapter.
When she said the name of the tittle, all I thought was: THE END IS COOMMING!!!!
I hope this is some plan of Daring's Or else Indy and a lot of us will be quite crossed.
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But this isn't a four legged race different than their own, this is an entirely different species. It's not only exotic, but falls under their ideals....
Christ, all of us are supporting Aryanne and Jay's relation, This is what happens when the only other main protagonist is a constantly fucking up the main characters day. Obviously Daring and Jay are going to run into each other again somehow, maybe Aryanne will become attached to Jay when this happens, and they somehow do a threeway thing.
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Wow... Daring, I'm... disappointed in you. I don't know about this guy, but I would be really... heartbroken, having someone I put my trust into betray me for cash... you don't do that, no no no... Unless Daring's got some delicious plan up her sleeve
She sounds adorable, and I get the name choice 8D
Hahaha... I'm sad now ;v;
KEEP IT UP!
I can sense all the angry sex that's gonna happen if Daring Saves Jay.
Wat.... this story keeps on getting weirder and weirder, but I love it!
You just can't trust anyone, can you?
What the fuck is even going on anymore?
I'm confused. Nazi's? Of all the things? But... but, why? Is this like a meme I don't get?
Nazi pony is best pony!
well that was an interesting twist.
and isnt aryanne an earth pony?
6444723 well Daring is an Indiana Jones expy and we did have some Nazis show up on the blimp awhile back so it makes sense for them to come back but Daring working with/for them well that is new.