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Well if you need an editor send me a message. I should have enough time to help out if need be... Or I can recommend several editors I know
Oh wow, I favorite this story, and an update appears that very night.
I need to favorite more stories.
Bah! Such a tease! But I kinda have to admit it's better of you to not take advantage of her while shes drunk. Wait till the moment is right. Good chapter! I have been waiting for this to return! Glad to see you're continuing it! I can't wait see what lies in store for the future chapters!
Awesome chapter. And take your time; I'm in no rush.
The sexual tension is overwhelming, although I'm impressed you've managed to go this far without pure clop.
I've been trudging through classes the entire day, going on automatic. Then I see this update and the whole day just got a hell of a lot better. Thanks dude!
gwadafjl
just kiss her already!
Yay!
*Throws a knife in the room and sees it stick in all the tension*
Wow. Pretty sweet chapter.
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Amen to this.
I don't know man how are you managing to make this story so damn intense and hooking... But fuck, this is the best human story I've read in some time!
It's ok. The chapter was well written. :3
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I completely agree
YAY!!
I want to see one of those... or you probably meant bloody traps?
Nevertheless, it cracked me up really much, so it was a funny fail.
EDIT: It IS a booby trap... it got ME too!
Isn't Dusk Shine the 63'd version of ?
:(
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"Booby trap" is actually a fairly common term referring to traps meant to be set off by the victim, as opposed to being set off remotely.
As for why they are called "booby" traps, I don't know. I assume it's because they trick the victim into setting it off themselves, making a fool, or "boob" of themselves.
3113600 Really? Booby traps is a real thing? Well... this name itself is a trap too, because it caught the pervert in the net. In other words, it tricked me...
Well, thanks for the info... but I still think bloody would be more fitting. With all the damage he went through and injuries he received. A nice metaphor, just saying...
Uuuugh. This is one of my favorite stories ever. But I feel as if giving us a name takes the immersion or whatever away.
You need a new editor? I'd be happy to offer my assistance.
The fact that you updated period made me as happy as
So thank you. Nice to see some awkward drunkenness that isn't blown out of proportions. Very well handled, n my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Another awesome chapter, keep up the good work
it
3113584 Damn spells Twilight messes up.
Oh, you are a tease, mister Scatman
as awesome as ever
Well, this was a fun one...
3113646 Don't read much, do you? Don't worry, we're all a little quirky here.
3113584 And what does that tell you?
Trying to sleep while a pair of Ponys are getting it on in the next room? Yeah....that might be a Little hard.
This is definitely my favorite story on FIM maybe even one of my very favorite adventure story's.
3115058 Nah, with all the writing an school on my neck, i have no time for simply anything... but that booby part just got me really good. Maybe I'm just anxious too much, that my pervert part of me gets the better out of me now... and this IS a romance story, so yeah... it tricked me really good.
Your editor left? Hmm...
Damn it, why do I keep piling stuff onto my plate? This story is just too good to pass up.
Could I offer my own services?
3118440 lololololololol
Have a good day, bro.
Love from Arty!
3120092 Hehhe, well THAt was a fail, not his. And thank you for the nice wishes, I needed that...
3122943 Anytime, my friend!
Love from Arty!
3124154 Love from The Balance!
3113317 fuck, not another meme
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Ooooh, in the Words of Quagmire "GIGGITY! ALRIGHT!!!"
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A meme?? Where? I don't see it.
Bang already!
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Tell me about it
Geez I was expecting something to happen there but once again the ground was pulled from under me and I was left hanging
MOAR
Sexual tension.... Alot of it. And it's gonna blow.... Hopefully soon.
Normally this kind of teasing would kill me in a story, but you are going at a perfect pace for them. I can see that it will probably be a few more chapters before they actually get together and do it, but I think it'll be well worth the wait. It'd be stupid to skip all of the action just to get to the "action".
I don't know why, but I always find myself coming back to the "first time 'together'" chapters in fanfics, especially when it's Human X Pony. I'll be happy as long as when you finally do get to their first time, you make it memorable.
By the way, anyone got any good suggestions for romance clopfics I can read while I'm waiting on this? I've already read what's been poste of This Magic Moment.
And I prefer human X pony, well written, and a realistic (or close to it) amount of romance. Just like this one.
Suggestions?
Oh celestia,I keep laughing at this scene XD
Oh and this story!,I love this story a lot!
DARING GO HOME YOU'RE DRUNK
Marley is now best camel. I can totally understand the type of character you're going for with him, and it is HILARIOUS. I want to see more of him!
And the awkward tension was expertly done. DAMN you are good at this! I entirely approve of holding off on the 'doin' it' part, and pushing it off til later. But the subtle hints of Daring's feelings were very cute.
And finally, I know this is a bit late but if you are in need of an editor's services I would be enthralled to offer my assistance. I guarantee you'll be pleased with the results!
3114089 I spit my drink at this...in any other context, this would be perturbing as FUCK.
3124745 i dont want the mustach to becoma a meme
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I don't feel as if people view it as a meme. I think people view it as a stamp of approval, letting the author know he did a good job. I E: Man what a great chapter this was! Great job Mr. Author-person!