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Loved it. As usual, your work is entertaining and more than satisfactory. It's funny really, I only just found this story yesterday and proceeded to look through all your stories. Keep up the good work dude.
Im lovin this!
Yay! Fighty time! Fighty time! Blood! BLOOD! BLOOD!!!
Dat Tsundere.
ALSO, YOU FINALLY UPDATED.
Oh my god.
Sweet, this story finally got updated.
really enjoyed
Wow shit's happenin'
Only thing though exactly when does this get cloppy?
Fucking awesome.
2865423 when he gets around to it, considering that there's a 50/50 chance of me bailing when he gets to it I'm willing to wait... besides it's a good story
Heh I find it funny that the entire time some random pony was trying to kill him he never once said "Help there's someone trying to kill me!" You watch Temple of Doom recently or something? The references are strong with this one.
Should mention them passing by a very flat brown earth pony.
2865423 Give it time, the story is working towards it.
I just finished watching Far Cry 3 not too long ago so I can't stop myself from thinking about knife fights.
Anyway, I think that was like an Indiana Jones moment or something, because Daring was thinking his calls for help was about something normal instead of something urgent. I'm just surprise he never said "Help!" in the slightest.
2865423Yeah. My thoughts too.
I'm loving this story!
love the chapter
2865172 yay here are some moustaches for your troubles
2865869 MAIM! KILL! BURN!!!
This
Is
Fucking
Awesome.
2865869 SWAG
i dont even care that theres no clop yet, this story is amazing
2866020
Have fun working at McDonalds.
2866025Oh, yes.
I'm loving it.
2865854*Twists my own*
This update has satiated my lust for blood. For now.
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PRAISE THE GODS ABOVE
FOR THE AUTHOR HAS GIFTED US WITH A NEW CHAPTER
*sniffle*
*Wipes away tear*
Thank you sir...
2865872 Ummm.....ooookaaay. Anyway, amazing story, looking forward to updates.
this update was worth the wait
Heheh. By the time, if he ever does, manage to get out of Equestria, he'll need probably need reconstructive surgery just so he's recognizable. If the trend continues, he's got many more fights ahead.
You see a sign reading:
I wouldn't mind actually reading some of the thoughts he has about Daring, those of the vague half-formed variety, that would be the answers to ‘why questions’ later on, but that have meaning which is not currently obvious to him as a precursor to love. I think you have been describing the emotions in your writing, that would accompany these type of thoughts. But maybe the main character is not as self conscious of his thoughts, as I am? Everyone thinks at-least slightly differently I suppose…
I love all of this.
MURDER DEATH KILL! MURDER DEATH KILL! YYYEEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!
MOAR!
Also Ka-bar is more brutal than bowie knife.
I loved this chapter!
I joined for the clop but stayed for the story
It's nice to read a mature story that doesn't go straight to the sex. I find myself starting to really care about this budding relationship between Protagonist and Daring. Keep up the great writing, 'cause I'm lookin' forward to how this develops.
For this chapter of I Can't Help, the part of Daring Do will be played by Brick Tamland.
Well, well, well. Look who's a hoopy frood who knows where his towel is!
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And I'm loving your avatar! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
Quick
Grab the Bowie Knife from his corpse
But casually
2868146 Never leave home without your towel.
Nice chapter, good to have you back
Ah, these two are hilarious AND adorable.
I'm going to assume that that's Fleur de Lis and this character is just a moron
Awesome Chapter
It's pretty eerie how well these two synch up
0:39
2871519 i fucking loved that movie
2871519 Oh god, it does sync up well doesn't it?
As great as this chapter was, that fight (while fun) was more annoying than anything.
So I'm just supposed to accept I never call for help, that Daring doesn't recognize the clear panic and struggle in my voice, that Daring can't hear anything else at all going on, and that I'm pretty much helpless in the situation?
Yeah, no. That goes way beyond my willing suspension of disbelief. Her not coming out at the first call was something I could accept, even if I didn't care for it. Not coming out at the second call was something I could hardly accept, and it was getting very, very annoying. Every call after that was completely unacceptable, as was the fact that not once did I call for help.
Honestly, this chapter would have been much better without the fight scene. Or at least it would have been better had the fight ended in a more believable way (as in, either I call for help the second I'm able to, or Daring recognizes the clear panic in my voice, or I hold the guy off on my own, or she hears the fighting, or any combination of them).
Aside from the fight, everything else was as good as usual. Nice descriptions, not many writing errors, and the chapter is a good length (took a while, but worth the wait, although I hope the next chapter comes soon ). Very nice chapter.
2871519I do believe that counts as molestation. Or am I wrong?
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Correct.
Was that a hitchickers guide to the galaxy reference I saw in there or was it just coincidence.