Well that nutshot had to hurt!

Anyone waiting for "This Magic Moment" to update!
The next chapter of that story will be up in a little bit.

Define "In a little bit"

My excitement levels of rising dangerously!

Something beginning with "N"? Hmmmmmmmmm.......... Nutmeg?

2936024 Probably Norwegians, actually.

OH Oh OH OH OH OH SOOOOOOOOON

A cray blue bastered who is named after an aztic god of the sun but looks nothing like him a horny carzy rich bastered and Nazie pony what next the Alicorn's grail

Shangri-la?! What?! I wanted to go to Agartha!

All jokes aside(...assuming that those were jokes ) you have produced another amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next one! I'm also curious as to how you'll introduce sexy time~.

The next chapter is gonna be good,I know it for sure.

Well alright! I'm loving this story.

still awesome

I actually find the idea of this random ass French pony hilarious. If it weren't for the incredibly creepy fanboy nature of his stalking (and lustful intentions) he could be the joke of the story, popping up everywhere and being the subject of all manner of misfortunes as he tries to hunt down his true love. The fact that 'Indy' is now a female makes it all the funnier! References everywhere!

I wanna see more Marley. And now that Daring is drunk, is it BANGIN' TIEM??

Man, your screwy formatting is driving me crazy! Take this line for instance.

“No, no, it’s fine. You could’ve asked for my opinion about it, but that’s okay, I guess.”

It's indented further than it should be, and it has a bunch of extra spaces at the end.

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I read "BANGIN' TIEM??" in the same voice I read Ben "The Thing" Grimm's dialogue from the Fantastic Four.

Still my favorite Daring Do story!

Fuck yes, update of both stories.

The 'N' word for that group is Nazi. I thought it looked familier.

oh yesnew chaptergood one tooexcpeshly the nut crunch part hehehehe

new chapter fuck yeah

Kansallissosialistinen

If it turns out that the N-word is Nazi...
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Before you can ask your next question, a stallion walks up from behind Daring and says something. Both you and your only friend turn around to see a brown earth pony with greasy black hair smiling at Daring. You can smell the alcohol coming off of him.
He says something else, but it’s not in English.
“What did he say?” you ask Daring.

"He doesn't like you"
"Sorry"
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Also hope to see more of Marley, he just seems really cool.

Oh of course there has to be Nazis. Lol, couldn't be axe wielding Narwhals. Lustig, "Die nationalsozialistische" war in Finnisch.

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It means "National Socialist" in Suomi. AKA, the Finnish language.
So it's like the National Socialist German Workers' Party, or something like that.
In all honesty, this one should be called the "Kazi party" instead, but... whatever.

Also, cliffhangers make me angry.
And you wouldn't like me when I'm angry.

Daring shakes her head. “No, no, not this time. I actually need a room.” She glances at you quickly before leaning in to whisper something to ‘Marley’ the camel. You can’t hear what it is, though.

You know, I get the feeling she specifically asked for only one bed. A feeling only reinforced by the fact that Marley called them lovebirds. Anyway, continuing to love the story, keep up the good work!

and now they screw

......OR DO THEY

One thing: Why French/France? It seriously pulled me out of the story for a moment. Maybe it was intended to mention it next to Equestria and whatnot, but the joke backfires without being commented on. I suggest you change it or let the protagonist react in some way or another. Letting him blink would already be enough. But Daring telling him about this very mysterious, mythological place even might be even funnier.

Right now, however, it feels like you forgot France is an actual country, but just a weird place for people with a funny accent.

Awesome work as usual. All I have to say about the references is, "References...references everywhere."
That and the stalker/Nazi groups are nicely portrayed here. You're doing great making Daring Do Daring Do.
Doctor Jones would be proud.

And. Then. They. Kissed. And. Then. They. Had. Sex.

The ponies that through them out yell something, but you can’t understand what it was.

The ponies that throw them out yell something, but you can’t understand what it was.

She shrugs. “I don’t know. They usually go by a much shorter name, though... uh... it starts with an ‘N’. Shit! I can’t remember.”

Like the Nazis?

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The ponies that throw them out yell something, but you can’t understand what it was.

*Threw.
Fucking. Fail.

I have come to the conclusion that they did not eat anything!

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Awesome work!

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Nice catch! Can't stop laughing.

And then they screwed

Aww fucking hell, way to leave us hangin' with that ending, mate

Amazing story. I look forward to more. Just don't rush it please. I would think random sex would ruin it.

Ahuizotl is a Ahuizotl. Like a Pony named "Pony". Please have Ahuizotl in the fic

Daring used ball breaker! It's super effective!

Hellz yeah! I missed this story and am glad it's back in the house and better then ever! Most excellent updates!

I don’t know. They usually go by a much shorter name, though... uh... it starts with an ‘N’. Shit! I can’t remember.

Ni?
That or Nazis, cause who else did Indi have to fight against? Aliens? HA, that would be a laugh.

Ah, those two are cute.

And damn, Daring's badass.

2937837 I didn't think of that.

But you're right, it does add up.

2939355 What he said

Those unicorns with a really long name shotened eh? I immediately thought 'Neighzi" with pun included as I laughed myself through the rest of this chapter.

You can only assume what it is.
Or who it is.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOHHH

This needs some serious proof-reading but I'm enjoying it.

your stories are great looking forward to the next episode of the two stories in particular that of celestia and her boyfriend Lieutenant human

Amazing fic!!!!!

2945954 I second that

Like the second Indiana Jones hint she dropped there and finally this guy has a name. At first, I wasn't too happy about the name "Jay" either and thought the guy would make a name for himself, but the more I think about the more I think this guy in the story is a lot like "Jay" for Men In Black. Always being in the middle of all this misfortune but manages to bounce back and make things right (and even better) by the end of the whole ordeal. I think this name is nice, wish I can invent a new name for him though.

i want another chapter