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NintendoGal55


I'm a Canadian gal who loves to write. :D

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This story is a sequel to Introspective Rainbow


After finding the letter, Fluttershy is thrilled at having her feelings for Rainbow Dash returned. However, Rainbow Dash, unaware of Fluttershy's find, continues to struggle. Meanwhile, Fluttershy is unsure about revealing her own feelings and hopes to do this right.

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Very nice. You did well balancing out the reasons Fluttershy had. Tough love can be one of the most delicate topics for Flutterdash. Yet, you managed to get that balanced pretty well. A fitting sequel indeed. :yay:

As far as suggestions go, well I only have the generic: They get together and discuss their feelings then blah blah blah..
not saying that it would be a bad idea though

D'awwwwwwwwww. That is all.

Ah, I've always prefered Fluttershy point of view in any FlutterDash story, and here I'm certainly not disappointed. :pinkiesmile:
Even if here, it feels like it's a fiction made to argue "why Flutterdash is the OTP"... A lot :twilightsheepish:
Can't wait to read more.
(oh and I just realise that you change the title Introspective Fluttershy)
Anyway, did you read the Tumblr comic FlutterDash Prequel Trilogy ?

2367508 Don't worry, I just fixed it. :pinkiesmile:

2366610 I had to fix it, but thank you anyway! :twilightsmile:

Wonderful sequel! Fluttershy is really amazing! I love how everything is going on. :twilightsmile:
And it is incomplete. Yay! :yay: Can't wait to read more!

Loved it, can't wait for more :yay:

one thing I noticed was their use of the word digress during their introspections. just another thing they both have in common but don't realize yet.
:twilightsmile:

2367840
Not sure why it was such a necessity to do that. To be honest, it wasn't much of a gain to take it out rather than keep that part. Though, story is still nice and I'm sure that you had good reasons and such

2369593 I wanted to, but, I was kind of tired of people calling out that it was more about defending the pair than it was about Fluttershy's thoughts. To be fair, I see their point. While it was meant as a way for Fluttershy to speak up about it... I may save that for another story that would call for it.

This is why you're my favorite Flutterdash writer, these story's are so sweet! ^^

Can't wait for next chapter! :D

Awesome sauce! Another epic fic!

i loved it, i love all flutterdash fanfics but this one was special, it showed Dash's soft side and i really liked it! :rainbowkiss::yay:

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