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NintendoGal55


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I don't understand it, I don't know what to do. Anytime I try to make sense of this, I can never find an answer. All I know for sure is that I love Fluttershy more than anything.

First person with Rainbow Dash as she ponders elements of her past and present within her dilemma of trying to understand why she loves Fluttershy.

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I loved it. Very Interesting. Complete :fluttercry::derpyderp1: Hell no write more. I want to know what fluttershy thinks and what she will do.

I like it! :twilightsmile: The part about Rainbow having Flutteshy's magazines was a bit uncharacteristic of her. Maybe Wonderbolts magazines, but Fluttershy? Maybe hidden under the cannon it makes sense... Overall, its great as always! I really enjoyed it.:rainbowwild:

A very good introspection for Rainbow. I'm with you, I like to think that Rainbow can prepare her own meals. Though I'm sticking with Fluttershy is the better cook.

Funny thing is, as I was reading Rainbow's letter, I was wondering what would happen if it were accidentally mailed to Fluttershy and reading her reaction. I guess that little mystery is answered, but a larger one looms. What happens now? This is marked as complete, so you're leaving it in our "capable" hands. :unsuresweetie:

Rainbow's past was interesting to read, especially her relationship with Gilda, and it provided a clear difference between Gilda and Fluttershy. Part of me would like to think that Rainbow feels some regret over the loss of the friendship, but the way you presented it made it quite clear that, in Rainbow's mind, she made the right choice.

A cool read, and, more importantly, a pretty good example that I can use for writing in first person. Never felt comfortable with it. Too many sentences beginning with "I". :twilightsheepish:

You know, stop White Knighting her. Fluttershy's shy and easily scared, but she's not some porcelain doll. She can handle herself just fine. Sure, I can get protective of her. But only when she actually actually needs it. She needs to step up and be more assertive, and she needs some tough love. So if you really think I'm some cruel and terrible friend to her, get over yourself. I know how to dish out the tough love she needs.

Thank you. Thank you.....thank you.

2256135 She's going to be full of happy hugs and kisses! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

2256452 Hey, Rainbow can collect more than just Wonderbolts stuff. And it's because she loves Fluttershy, that's why she has them. :raritywink:

2256462 Yep, Fluttershy would definitely be a better cook! Thank you for that, I do like to think Rainbow can at least make some basic meals and use the oven if nothign else. Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I had some ideas from Souldin's own headcanon and it made sense. Yeah, Rainbow does regret the loss of her friendship with Gilda and can't hate her... But, she made the right choice, and she is not about to go easy on someone who wrongfully threatened her friends.

2256506 And thank you, too! :raritystarry:

Damn, this is just heart breaking, sometimes you just want to give your heart away but can't, eh? I have not read a Flutter Dash or even a Gilda/Rainbow dash fic in a long time. I should get on that. Damn, doubt will always enter one's mind. Craszy that Fluttershy found out at the end huh? Damn, very well written, a few errors though nothing major, loved it very much:ajsmug: Gilda is third favorite villian lol.

Please... more... n..n...NOW

and also Jake Roberts' "Relatively Safe Liasons"

:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:




:pinkiehappy:

2257144 You betcha! :pinkiehappy: I liked the angle you took in how not only is she afraid, but also doesn't quite understand why she loves Fluttershy, but just knows that she does. :twilightsmile:

2257020 Thanks a lot! Very crazy, indeed. :derpytongue2:

2257124 We'll see! :pinkiehappy:

Is this the first time you did 1st person view? Anyway, you did a pretty good job getting into Rainbow Dash's shoes (well, hooves :derpytongue2:) and showcasing her thoughts and feelings.

A very nice read. Good job! :twilightsmile:

2257274 I've done first person in the past, but not very often. This is the first time I did first person for an MLP fanfic, though. :pinkiehappy: Thanks a lot!

Well that was well written. I've always loved Flutterdash, even if I prefer stories where Fluttershy is the one who's in love. :fluttershysad:
The only part I didn't like (but it's just because of my tastes about it) is the Gildash part. This pairing make me sick :pinkiesick: (seriously)
And some part made me laugh, especially :

Why do you do this to me, Fluttershy? Why? What am I saying, it's not your fault. I can't help that I'm in love with you. I'm sorry, snuggy-wuggy.
I did not just say that.

mwahaha :rainbowlaugh:
And how the hell did she found the letter ? Dashie should be more careful...:rainbowhuh:
Anyway, Flutterdash FTW :yay::heart::rainbowwild:
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2259951 I can go both ways, that's the beauty with these two. :pinkiehappy:

Yeah... I don't like that pairing one bit, either. :pinkiesick: I put it in as a backstory element, and wanted to keep it to Rainbow's character, and yet still make it that she also didn't exactly enjoy it as a whole.

:rainbowlaugh: I'm glad you enjoyed that! Silliness for the win! :pinkiehappy:

I don't know how she found the letter! :pinkiegasp: Rainbow, be more careful next time!

:raritystarry: That fanart!! Squee!! :yay:

I haven't read all stories NintendoGal but this is my favourite so far.

well done:twilightsmile:

okay, only one issue I took with Rainbow's musings.

She's great with animals, even that little spawn of a rabbit... But I digress.

digress? would Rainbow even know what that word means if she didn't read it in a Daring Do book? :rainbowhuh:

2260853 :ajbemused: I think she would eventually read more than just Daring Do, and I think she knows a bit more than we think. I wouldn't say she has an extensive vocabulary like Twilight, or even Rarity, but she's not childish either. She CAN read, she just didn't like reading books, and I'm sure she's learned plenty of words in other ways.

And lastly, this is my story. Headcanon.

So yeah... Apparently I'm close to beating Regidar in this commenting thing :rainbowderp:

Ok onto the actual story... THIS.IS. awesome! Course it not one of the most AWESOMEST EPICEST stories I've ever read, that goes to such masterpieces, such as shine ect.. But it's still a great story overall

can we expect a 1st pony musing from Fluttershy after she read that letter? just curious.

wow this was amazing it got me sad, happy and all around warm at seeing how cute rainbow was figuring out what to do. i really hope you make a sequel. i honestly felt somewhat sad though at her thoughts because i think its air to say at some point in our lives we have all had a crush on a friend, and the fear of getting friend zoned is so great one never speaks or acts upon those feelings. it was really sad because it brought memories of my own. im not sure if your objective was to relate to the readers but it sure seems like it did to me. i dont really like shipping because when there its usually on dark stories where they lose their loved on and that shit scars me emotionally. but this was nice and like i said it was somewhat sad. i loved it though, really hope to see more.

:twilightsmile:

Oh, she DOESN'T burn cereal. Guess the 9-1-1 on speeddial was unessecary then........

2259951

I think she found it in that box with the comics......

I loved "Pegasi Introspection" for the way their thoughts were expressed.
And I love this story for the same reason! :raritystarry:
The ending was really great! I'm happy that Fluttershy could see the letter. :twilightsmile:

Unexpected GildaDash... :twilightoops: :twilightsheepish: Well, it helped the story, so that's okay. :pinkiehappy:

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Awesome! :pinkiehappy: I'm looking forward to see the story about Fluttershy's musings! :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

Absolutely loved this :rainbowkiss: You really got into her head and it really felt like this was how Rainbow would rationalize the situation. To the sequal :rainbowdetermined2:

Jeez you write the best flutter-dash fics.

Well. That was absolutely fantastic. Please continue this.

OMG Rainbow sent it??!! I thought she said she wouldn't! Oooohhh I wonder what Fluttershy was thinking :raritywink:
I really like how you put yourself in Dash's hooves! Your really good at this kind of stuff! :twilightsmile:

Well,
Derp U L8er
U deserve 6/6 derpys! For your derptastic work!
:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

GildaDash?
I dont wanna live on this planet anymore.:twilightoops::rainbowwild:
But seriously, if you forget the "hot pegasi on griffin action" its actually a great story, told on an original perspective while still keeping the characters core personality. and that, i like:pinkiehappy:

This deserve 4 bigmac out of 5
:eeyup::eeyup::eeyup::eeyup:

i loved it, i don't know how to put it and i don't want this to be and awkward reader to book relation ship, but i must let you know how i feel for you, fanfic, i've loved you since the minuet i started reading you. Please don't hate me for loving you.


Forever a fan,
-OG- :rainbowkiss::yay:

That was AWESOME :rainbowkiss::yay:

I'm not sure how I feel about this story. It's cute but something about the style is bugging me but I can't figure out what. It's a bit repetitive and messy but given what it's supposed to be this makes perfect sense and it would probably be weirder if it wasn't. It feels longer than the sequel even though it's almost 2900 words shorter. Other than these things I can't see what it could be that bugs me so I'm drawing a blank.

I'll have to join the write-Fluttershy's-reaction crowd too.:twilightsmile:
:facehoof:
I already had that on my reading list. Silly me.

Speaking of that, I'm not sure if maybe there should have been a short bit of Dash debating if she should send the letter after she got done writing it. It works like it is but I don't think it would have hurt to have that too as long as it didn't get too long.
*reads sequel*
Ah, that makes sense.

Finally, some small corrections:

and was outcasted

outcasted -> outcast

it was all I needed know.

it was all I needed to know.

I still wonder a lot of things

I still wonder about a lot of things

her confidence and assertive issues.

her confidence and assertiveness issues.

To put it simple

simple -> simply

Gimme a sequel NOW!:flutterrage:
Seriously. You had all that tension and Rainbow's unsurities and then Fluttershy reads the letter? How!? Why!?
I need to know:fluttershysad:


Oh wait; there is one. My bad:twilightblush:

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