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I'm a Canadian gal who loves to write. :D


Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy had recently moved in together, with everything going swimmingly. Pretty soon, it's apparent that Rainbow has gotten a bit slack with the housework, usually leaving Fluttershy to do it. This doesn't bode well, as it eventually catches up to both of them.

Proof read by Dran Kito.

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Comments ( 28 )
Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013
Comment posted by NintendoGal55 deleted Dec 15th, 2013
Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013

That was a nice read. I like how you touch on this more realistic issue between the couple if they finally live with each other. The little bit of Rarijack was cool too...

Comment posted by NintendoGal55 deleted Dec 15th, 2013
Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013

3389409 :ajsleepy: Unlike most writers, I never resort to bashing a character if I don't like them, thank you very much.

Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013

I need to post a story so you can actually link my account when you mention me! XD
Glad to see you post this! =)

3389493 XD Thanks, I had trouble finding your account, so I settled for this.

Me too, I finally finished and decided it was about time. Thanks! :yay:

This goes on my list of top FlutterDash fic. Brava!

This is so cute, I LOVE it!

You get 6/6 rating from me!

At first I thought you were writing Rainbow quite queerly, but then it all evened our after the fight.

Another good story from you, as I expected. :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by TYRANT ALEX deleted Oct 24th, 2013

Cute story and with a good lesson about what it can happen when you live with somebody else... you can have sex all the time XD :rainbowlaugh: ....ok no, you have to clean the place first jejeje

again nice story i give a thum up to this :3

pd: i bet those dislikes are only cuz they wanted clop and theres none Xp

Somehow it doesn't surprise me that your story was the one I picked during the contest. Well done as usual.

I must say that there is definitely the slice of life in there, the scenario was a perfect example of many relationships between some lovers, heck I've had these moments before where I'd slip up and cause us to break up but then I'd feel bad and try to correct my mistake and she was easy to come to an understanding with which makes it easier to make it right. And I try my hardest to protect her from words that could hurt her nowadays if she talks about something she dreads and I think it's awesome when she's doing something I never had the opportunity to do, I just keep my mouth shut and think of how she would take it. And at times I have to be her knight in shining armor when our relationship is threatened by rumors and other people trying to get us to separate for their own satisfaction. So I would say that I have learned a valuable lesson in our relationship but there are plenty more to learn.

This is definitely something to follow as if it were a wise old mans advise.

It is also a very valuable lesson.

I'm going to give this one a 5 star rating in awesomeness and in being something to learn from.

Why did you wait so long before realase your contest entry ? :rainbowhuh:
That was an awesome/cute story though :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by IonXtreme deleted Oct 24th, 2013


Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013
Comment posted by Soft Shell deleted Dec 15th, 2013

Very nicely done. The conflict exploded just like a build up argument would with a married couple who had been holidng in a lot of little things liek that. It made me think of Dash as a lazy stallion for a few moments :rainbowwild: ...she kinda suited the part well.

At first I was surprised by the sexual tones but then I remembered that this is your work :scootangel: you certainly are more than just one of the good Flutterdash writers. You pulled the feels out very well thought the story. It really felt like Dash was more than just a little stuffed when she left her fillyfriends house in such a bad mood. Although the moment Twi appeared I thought to myself, oh no... here we go again, Twi will have the answers in one form or another (like she does in far too many stories). But it was nice when the conversation went more like her just bring Dash round to see that she should just have said what she was really thinking. That moment in the story stands out to me because of how Twi managed it, without being the one with all the answers.

dingbats last night anyway.

:rainbowlaugh: dingbats. I didn't know other people used that word too.

Well, it was nice to see something new from you and it was great to see Flutterdash. The TwiPie hints were nice. The RariJack hints were even better and I found the whole helping out on the farm to be rather funny. The CheeriMac was great to get a hint of too.

All in all, you get a well deserved upvote and fave from me, and I hope you enjoy the comment too :pinkiehappy:

A FlutterDash fic with Rarijack mentioned? Haha! The cuteness has been doubled!

Some things I don't like but 9/10 Dashies approve:rainbowdetermined2::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

Comment posted by Raindash3242 deleted Apr 20th, 2016

“There’s a little thing called common courtesy , I’m sure you’ve heard of it,” Fluttershy snapped back, actually yelling and startling Rainbow. “It’s where you do something because it’s the right thing to do! And for your information, I have tried to asked you, but you normally just run out before I can even speak unless it sounds like I’m upset like I did earlier! Oh, but why should that stop you? You obviously don’t care if I have to do this by myself! And I’m sick of you using that as an excuse to not help me! Bills and budget? Need I remind you that I work too?! I may not make as much as you taking care of pets and acting as a vet, but by Celestia, I was doing fine before you moved in! Right now, I feel more like I’m taking care of a child ! So, don’t give me that! You do your job well and I know you have to practice, but guess what? I’m not talking about that! I am telling you to either help me or MOVE OUT! ”

and at that moment rainbow knew she fucked up

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