• Member Since 31st Jul, 2012
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Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

Comments ( 18 )

What?!
A new story out of nowhere?!

Commence read...

EDIT: Nevermind. It's the fucking CMC story. Not out of nowhere.

Commence read...again...

Nice. Short and sweet.

Creative story. Nicely written pal.:pinkiesmile:

Awesome story. I feel just like a kid again.

Very sweet and fun. I prefer it as a one shot I think it's stronger that way.

Though it's been about a week, I finally read it. And it's a beautiful piece of writing. It reminds me of what I did when I was little with my old friends. Though I'm not that old (meaning I'm younger than you but I'm not gonna say how old I am) it still made me feel like a kid, or at least a younger kid than I act like. Keep writing magnificent stories Elusive.:pinkiesmile:

2331668 Why do you keep sending me that same Seananners picture? As amusing as it is, it's really confusing. The first time you sent it, it made very little sense even after you explained it. But the other 3 (including this one) was just completely out of the blue. Especially the second time you sent me it when you said "DIE INA, DIIIIEEEEE", just saying. :pinkiehappy:

2331756 Wait, correcting myself, you sent me an evil chicken when you said "DIE INa, DIIIIEEEEE", but still you keep sending me Seananners pictures and it's kind of weird.

2331766 Evil chicken was Seananners!:pinkiehappy:

2331764>>2331771 ...Okay then.



2331764 I have to say, Kylah is really cute.

2331779 .....I am really bad at commenting sometimes (like that one time when I failed to hit :eeyup: and hit :facehoof:)

Reminds me of the summer days in my childhood, playing with my friends until sunset.

I enjoyed this story. :twilightsmile: Very well done.

This was very good. Short and sweet. I'm not sure how interesting it is for you to write, but I really like this concept of the CMC using their imaginations and having fun, not just trying specifically to get their cutiemarks all the time.

4292960 I think I'm stupid because I never even realized that I made them NOT look for their cutie marks.

On that same day, Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara are busy playing pirates in Diamond's bedroom. :-)

I really enjoyed this little story of yours. I really loved seeing the kinds of adventures the Crusaders invented, and would definitely be curious to see more of the adventure itself. That being said, the story does not require more of the adventure to be enjoyable. :twilightsmile: Well done!

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