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Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

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Life can be difficult in the new, aware of possible Changelings,
Equestria, with double the amount of guards patrolling the streets.
I can tell you my secrets of how to remain undetected in this dark new Equestria with this journal.
If you find this, tell any other Changelings what you have read.
We must survive in this world, And I will not let the Changeling race become extinct.
Even if it costs me my life...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )
Comment posted by Elusive Phoenix deleted Apr 20th, 2013

Extremely promising, dear Author!:pinkiehappy:
Awaiting further releases.:fluttershysad:

Fix the resolution on the cover pic.

1954315 Yeah, I kind of had a problem. Should work soon.:pinkiehappy:

Hmmm. A changeling that has survived living in Equestria its whole life there and falling in love with the pony that it took from the pony it's masquerading, intersting.

Must read more.

OOOOOOOOOOOOH! :derpyderp1: Now THIS looks interesting. :pinkiehappy: Ammette has been almost fully developed as a character in under 2,000 words, and your premise is original and thought-provoking! I particularly liked the dynamic between the changeling and her captive, and the Changeling's Guide will serve as a useful intro to each chapter's topic. Though your comments imply you are going for a comedy-heavy setup, I would love to see some drama, and maybe some bittersweet moments. Keep plugging away on that keyboard!

tl;dr - MOAR! :flutterrage:

1954582 Not completely reliant on comedy, but some jokes are made.
And I would have it tagged as sad, but comedy is considered a conflicting tag.:derpytongue2:

Thanks! The first story that someone likes for more than just the idea!:pinkiehappy:

When does the next chapter come out?!?!?!? :rainbowhuh:

1954849 When I convince everyone I hate my featured story, or I finish it.
In other words, within the month.

This is great! I can't wait for more.:pinkiehappy:


:raritywink::raritycry::ajsmug::rainbowkiss:

Interesting beginning; I can't wait to see where you'll take this! :twilightsmile:

This reads good so far, I'm looking forward to more.

1954849 or 13 weeks.:twilightblush: (I know that was completely out of the blue)

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