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Elusive Phoenix

If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?


Derpy isn't just a clumsy Pegasus. She's more than just one, simple, pony.
Derpy has D.I.D. (Dissociative Identity Disorder). But this is a special case. Most D.I.D. ponies are unaware of what their other personality does. Derpy and her other personalities are.
This one pony; with three different minds; saved Equestria.
But some things cannot be avoided. Especially bad ones.
This is what she did...

(Set at any time between Discord's capture and his "reformation". Preread by Literature. Rated Teen and dark for psychological horror.)

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 27 )

I don't know how well this story will turn out, but I just freakin' love this concept.
D.I.D. Derpy to the rescue!:pinkiehappy:

Looks good mate.
Couldn't find any mistakes.
Good idea as well!
What is up with you and having awesome ideas lately?:twilightsmile:

:moustache: very well then my job here is done

1250296 The job is never done!
Unless it's a good one!:pinkiehappy:

Make sure you clicked the link surrounded by arrows to make sure you clicked the link!

He sighed. But he was beaten, fair and square. She had won.

dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png <(Cuz Y'all Don't Know What's Inside My Chocolate Milk...Execpt Pinkie :pinkiehappy:)
BTW, How Does Everypony in Ponyville can Tell who's :derpytongue2:(Derpy), dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Derpy_Hooves_lolface.png (Ditzy) or dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Derpy_Hooves.png (Rina)?

1647505 If you actually paid attention to detail, you would notice that I mention their manes and coats change color depending on the persona.
According to the cover art, from left to right, it is: Ditzy, Rina, Derpy.
It's easy to tell Derpy apart because... well, DERP-D-DERP MUTHA F(oop)!:derpytongue2::ajsmug::eeyup::trollestia:

I really like it.:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

*Le moi is on *le stupide iPod
*Le moi cannot see *l'image
*Le Stupide iPod ---> e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
*Le Moi ---> dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png

Meh. Awesome idea, mediocre execution. You get half a moustache.


1648721 Better luck next time!:raritywink:

I like it. I find the idea great and well written. Now let me ask you a question: Why aren't you a millionaire novelist yet? Your really good, so why not bring it to the next level? I think you'd be really well at your job even though you still a teenager. Let's celebrate your fanfiction with burning everything! Everypony reading this should help. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: BURN!!

1651913 I do have one or two ideas that I want to do, but one of them is meant to be more of an animation than a novel, and the other I haven't written any of since 5th grade!

*sigh* I already loved this story before I was two paragraphs in.
The cute (Derp?) factor is off the charts.:derpytongue2: (of course I don't even have any charts but that's beside the point.)


Edit: AAAHHHHH I don't wanna be first!

I think I like it, and don't worry...as long as you continue the story I'll keep reading :D.

Gods, I'm so confused but you have my favorite pony is all Equestria so you have my FULL attention, plus the story really has me hooked:ajsmug:

2361290 the second chapter was really just to shut people up. I know it sucked.

I'm so confused but it's Derpy so I'll roll with it:derpytongue2: Even Gods must have their fun:ajsmug: Damn.....this is getting crazy:facehoof:

Oh Gods, this is crazy, poor Dinky:rainbowlaugh: This is getting crazy, love it, poor Depy:facehoof:

Huh, interesting premise thus far. I like it! :twilightsmile:

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