Space will leave you breathless, and so will many other things within it. But there are things being hidden from us. Things that, if found out, could ruin a thousand lives... but they could save a million more.
So the question is: would I want be the one to discover them?
Very nice start to a story!
Great start to a story, as usual. Also,
COINCIDENCE? I think not.
Why does a first-person story have a second-person description?
Also:
This new version needs a lot of work...
#BringBackInsurgence
P.S. I don't know what that last comment in 2016 was even about.