• Member Since 31st Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen May 28th, 2021

Elusive Phoenix


If a tire was on fire during a blizzard, would you stay close to it and keep warm, or run from the awful smell?

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Space will leave you breathless, and so will many other things within it. But there are things being hidden from us. Things that, if found out, could ruin a thousand lives... but they could save a million more.
So the question is: would I want be the one to discover them?

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Very nice start to a story! :twilightsmile:

Great start to a story, as usual. Also,

My name's Legacy.

COINCIDENCE? I think not.

Why does a first-person story have a second-person description?

Also:

do you want be the one to discovered them?

This new version needs a lot of work...

#BringBackInsurgence

P.S. I don't know what that last comment in 2016 was even about.

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