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ina23


I'm ina23. I'm a nerd that prefers to watch videos games than play them. I'm basically here to talk to my old friends at this point lmao

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[Author's Note] Whup, this was going no where. I hardly even liked Doctor Who.
Every Doctor Who and My Little Pony fan knows that Derpy would be a good companion, but why? Everyone has always thought that Derpy was, well, just ordinary Derpy. But nopony knows what Derpy has been through. She has been through a lot of predicaments and adventures with the Doctor, but this story brings us farther than that.
This is my first legit story so tell me your opinion on it so I can know if I should fix some things.

*Note: This fanfiction is set in the time of the 11th Doctor and is during the time of the Ponds and the TARDIS interior before the Christmas Special
Thank you to dominiquelestrange a.k.a my sister for proofreading.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 10 )

Haven't even read it yet, but I can tell "dis gon b gud".:pinkiehappy:

2130599 Ermegerd I pleased the person who inspired me to make this! Ermegerd!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:






:fluttershysad::fluttercry::derpytongue2::raritycry::scootangel::trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftleft:Yes, even when it's not one of your blogs I still did it):fluttershysad::ajbemused::applecry::rainbowhuh::facehoof:

'Tis indeed a most groovy tale. I look forward to seeing more of it.

2136055 No problem! It's great! Hope to read more from you! :ajsmug:

First thing's first, double space each paragraph. NOT EVERY LINE. Just the paragraph.
For some reason it's just easier to read, this site does weird things.

2163697 You know, like most fics on the site? Every paragraph needs an extra space.

2163783 Oh, I never really noticed that, ever.:facehoof:

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