(overdone story is overdone)
This is a short series, of Anon having little cute moments with each of the mane six.
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- Member Since 29th Dec, 2012
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Rupertthered
Just a writer that happens to write cute stories, and fetish, at least I think I am.
Rupertthered
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i have the feeling that im gonna like this
please continue
Holy hell the sweetness.
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I hope to not disappoint anyone in the future
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Thank you both
Well dammit, no i have the beetus
But totally worth it
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A rather simple yet nice little oneshot. Hope to see the others.
I like it. Could've used a little extra details, but it's nice.
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After this is done, you have to make a story about this instead of a bunch of shorts. I think it would work out really well.
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About what exactly?
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This is what I foresee!
Or something like that... I think you could make it work.
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Ahh I see. I'll have to think about it, I had just written a story, completely different from this, and it got rejected it seems so I'm quite mad right now about it. But I'll see what I can do
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If you ever need help, I shall gladly assist!
Unless it involves education, politics, religion, economics, geography, and/or spinach.
Especially spinach.
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Thank you for the offer, but I already have someone helping me, if I ever need someone else, I'll ask you
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UNLESS IT'S INVOLVES SPINACH!
I HATE SPINACH!
Nice update, I needed some Pinkie love.
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Now the question is, is it just AJ who feels like this and the others are just being really loving? Or do they all feel this way?
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In due time I say we will all find out
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Hooray for another update!
I suppose Applejack doesn't know what to think about her own feelings. Maybe that will hurt Anon's relationship with her...
Perhaps Rarity will help fix Mr. Anon up?
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Who knows what she thinks. And how would it hurt?
Or maybe fluttershy
wooooooooo just a little bit man theres only 2 more
Awesome.
IS GOOD!
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I need it!
omg that picture is too cute
This was a cute one. Fluttershy is top of my list, you can't help but fall in love with her. ^^
Yay the mane six is finished, now one where they come together?
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Wrong order, its
awaiting next chapter...
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This story is done.
Lyra!
Wait.. this can't really be the final chapter? is it?
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It is, I'll be making either a sequel or a prequel. This story is listed completed so this won't get anymore updates.
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I don't know, according to your picture I see Vinyl.
2569955 Background 6, Lyra, Bon Bon, Vinyl, Octavia, Dr Hooves, Derpy.
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Lol too much for me to work with. It's going to be one pony a week thing. But I have to see what I'll do first.
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That's how the sequel is planned to be done, but I'm hoping people in comments would vote, I only got 1 guy saying Lyra.
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One at a time I would prefer. But again I don't know which I wanna do first since someone had suggested I can maybe do a prequel. And I always had the idea of a sequel, so either would work for me.
Good run, good run.
And it ends with Celestia arbitrarily being OOC for a dang test. Avoid super fast personality shifts like that.
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Well I'm sure you can say at certain moments each character is OOC. I may have overdone it with Celestia yes, but again, the only reason the mane 6 were there with Anon was cause his life was miserable, and because I haven't bothered thinking of a background story and stuff yet she decided to send the mane 6 to teach him friendship. They had already been gone for a month, and they needed to return since they are still the elements of harmony.
2585542 So she sends them to Anon and then says shit like this.
She lies about Discord being free and threatens to end the human's life. How is that conducive to making Anon happier? She then turns around and admits that she lied about Discord being free and that she was the reason they were there. She pulls a full 180 in her tone in less than a sentence.
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The way I had it in my head was she was wanted to see if the mane 6 had done their job in showing him each element. This story isn't very serious, if it was I would have put a lot more thought into it. And I'm not that great of a writer either. All I'm saying is, Celestia came back, trying to make it seem like bad stuff is happening cause the mane 6 disappeared so she needed them to come back, but she knew they had grown attach to Anon, so she "threatened" to see what they have done in their time there. I can't prove anything else. If you didn't like the story just cause of how badly I wrote that then sorry, give me a thumbs down.
2585594 Nah. I rarely thumbs down based on story alone. Usually it's how the author reacts to criticism and self-awareness is always a good thing. Heck if you want help with pre-reading and such like that where people can help you edit your story and be there to bounce ideas off of.
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So you just wanted to see how I would react?
And again this story isn't serious, its just suppose to be cute moments, so I just write and if I like what I wrote I update the story. If I had made a prequel then I would have a pre reader and such. But this story and the sequel really aren't that serious to me, maybe others think it is, but I really don't.
2585621 No, my points were valid enough so I wasn't pulling your chain on that. Still authors that can admit their faults are the ones most likely to improve more than those who think their stories are perfect just the way they are.
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Ahh I see, but I don't consider my writing great if that's what you're understanding, I just write what comes to mind, and hope people like it honestly.
2585652 I know. I was saying your were aware of your story's faults which is good.