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Silbern


For the love of the Gods! If you fav it, like/comment it! Same goes for dislikes!

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[[2nd-Person x Cheerilee]]

You are stuck in a rather dangerous path that was never the intended route. Before that fork in the road was a happy life that involved a beautiful wife, two great kids and a job you loved in a community that you grew up in. Things were fantastic until the fatal accident begun to torment both your family and self for over a year now.

With two Ponies to raise and a demanding job, is there still hope for love with a old friend?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

Adorable. Downright adorable. Also horribly heart-wrenching. Beautiful work, mate. Good stuff. Keep at it.

Nice. I would very much like more soon.

Out of all the mares, I was married to Derpy.:derpytongue2: and you killed her:fluttershysad:

2149784 Thanks for the support! I deeply appreciate it! :ajsmug:

2152544 I'm trying! I'm trying! :pinkiehappy: lol I'm glad you like it!

2155507 I'm sworry... :pinkiesad2:

Love it! :pinkiehappy:

Keep up the good work. Although, there's one problem. You're using "your" the wrong way.

2935509 My apologies! I'll try to keep a much more focused eye on my work. Thanks for the heads up!

2936791 I appreciate the support!

Can't wait to see where this story goes next.

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Also, one more thing. In the first chapter, he wasn't named Cast Iron. Now he is. :rainbowhuh:

Correct me if I'm wrong? :pinkiesmile:

2975542 You are correct... I didn't realize it uintil I was editing chapter two that I made a mistake in chapter one! I was in a little mini-freakout mode until I tried to ninja the change in with hopefully no one actually noticing. It feels good to know that you noticed such things! :pinkiehappy:

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No problem. :scootangel:

If you want, I could be your proofreader! :rainbowwild:

I get in from work at 2 a.m. and sit down with a pepsi
Turn on late night ship fanfictions and then wonder why I'm here
It's meaningless and trivial and it washes over me
And once again I wonder is this all there is for me

Here I am again
Look at me again
Here I am Again
On my own
Trying hard to see
What there is for me
Here I am again
On my own

Life seems so pathetic I wish I could leave it all behind
This computer, this bed, these walls that fall in on my mind
Hold on for something better
That just drags you through the dirt
Do you just let go or carry on and try to take the hurt

Here I am again
Look at me again
Here I am Again
On my own
Trying hard to see
What there is for me
Here I am again
On my own

TL;DR:
I spend too much time reading fanfictions and writing them. :rainbowwild:

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