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Have you ever wanted to have a fun day, but in Equestria? Have you ever wanted to go on a date with Pinkie Pie? Have you ever wanted to help Fluttershy pick flowers? Or help Twilight with her spells? Well, now you can. This fan-fic lets YOU decide what you want to do with your favortie pony!
**To suggest an activity to do with a pony. Comment below. Please, keep it PGish, this fic is for everyone to enjoy, It is only rated Teen because there are some uses of alcohol and some suggestive things.** P.S If you dislike second person fics, then just don't read this! Just please take it somewhere else... ^^

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Whoa, a 2nd person fanfic where sex is not a scenario? This already looks good, dood.

Either get Twilight to learn the Zetta Beam like a boss or the more likely... Pinkie and/or Twilight pranking Rainbow Dash, my good sir, dood.

Rainbow Dash comes over to my house and we watch Antique Roadshow together while eating Kid's Cuisine Salisbury steak. Please, this is my fetish. :heart:

Anyhow, I'll be watching regardless. I'm intrigued by the concept no matter how it plays out.

The heck? Instant thumbs down? I think not sir! Have a thumbs up!

Not bad so far, would've enjoyed seeing more interaction with Pinkie in this chapter, but not a huge deal.

Something I'd like to see? How about a HNNNNNG-inducing date with either Fluttershy or Twilight?

Oh! And how about fourth-wall breaking lessons from Pinkie :pinkiehappy:

2226926 Well the first "chapter" was a sort of set up for all of the other chap. Which is why we didn't see much from Pinkish. Oh and :pinkiegasp: Fourth Lessons sounds like the most fun thing to write ever!!! :pinkiehappy:

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Ha! Awesome. I can't wait to see what you do with my request. Thanks!

Please, more. I want to read it, but I can't from where I'm posting. Finish the story, please.

2229172 If you mean the short stroy with a crush on Pinkie Pie, then it will be finished.

:rainbowlaugh: Hahaha, nice. Leave it up to Pinkie to remind "me" that I'm actually reading about "me", it's like some crazy Inception stuff.
Thanks for the laugh!

4th Wall breaking? Maybe my Zetta Beam thing isn't so farfetched after all, dood.

Please get a prereader. The premise is good, but you're making my eyes bleed.

Writtne fiction from a mind of a random brony in the United States Of Amercia.

*written
*America

Of course, you wouldn't know what that is yet. Your not that far in training yet." Pinkie whispered again, closer this time.

*You're

Almost like she didn't want anybody else to hear. One of her curls was getting in your face but it didin't matter because you are so confused that you threaten to leave.

Sentence fragment. Switching between present and past tense.

I only skimmed through the rest, and honestly, I couldn't make it to the end, the mistakes were that bad. That should be a warning sign.

Again, please get a prereader. There's groups for that, you know.

(And I apologize if I'm coming off a bit rude, first time doing something like this on a story.)

2232334 Okay, thank you I'll try to find a prereader and I'll preread it myself too. Thanks again, :pinkiesmile:

MORE NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :raritycry: :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::applecry::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright:

So I'm reading about myself talking to and about me in a story about myself... SELFCEPTION

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*Gasp*:pinkiegasp: it doesn't stop spinning! That means... THIS IS A DREAM! or that's just a gif and I'm over thinking things

You should probably have Pinkie maybe give you a "special party"? *Wink* *Wink*

You don't have to though, just a thought.

**Update** I'm writing another request right now :twilightsmile: Twilight trying to prank back Rainbow Dash with the help of you :yay:

Well, second person isn't that bad. Even though the story may talk about me doing stuff I wouldn't, it's still entertaining. Say if I were Eazy-E, I would be "cruisin' down the street in my 64."

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