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Appledash13


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(2nd POV)

Your name is Whirl Wind and you have made your dream job. Becoming a Wonderbolt. After your first show, a certain somepony takes interest in you.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 7 )

Pretty good, it gets my stamp o approval

Hmm. Seems interesting. Thumbs up

It's interesting, that's for sure. But as a second-person story, I'm a little disappointed with the naming of "me". Other than that, not bad.

no one´s mad, but i´m pretty sure if you did continue it a whole bunch of us would be happy.

This story is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update more soon it has my full attention now. :twilightsmile:

It would be nice if you could continue. This looks promising.

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