Exilo
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As far as I'm concerned regarding orgies, this one just plain freaked me out. And yet I can't stop smiling and laughing at the whole thing. Nice combo there, mate.
2053542 Judging by the Thumbs Down, I think many people share your sentiment. A lot of my fics are pretty odd, unfortunately.
2053781 That was actually quite nice. Would have preferred just one tiny and more vaginal action but this was nice too. Dunno why people thumb it down, it really does not deserve them.
2054519 Thank you for the comments. To be honest, the thumbs downs are disheartening. One reason I dislike a Thumbs Up/Thumbs Down system is that it's too easy for people to thumbs down works. I think Thumbs Downs should be reserved for works that are actually poor quality, not just fics that don't line up with your interests.
As far as vaginal, I have a lot of pony fics on my FA account, and those are more sexually explicit. I don't plan to post the highly sexual fics on this account, so you might have to head there for some awesome pony crotch.
2054571 appreciated mate.
See ya, and don't let the haters bite
2054614 Eh. I've just been getting it too easy over on FA. Starting over is hard, but hopefully when I start writing original material for this site, without the high fetishes, I might get some more attention. And thank you for the watch.
2054642 no problem.
Can you give a link though? Can't seem to find you
2054674 FA is down for me at the moment. I will Note you a link and some fics you might enjoy. And, if you have an FA account, perhaps you can give me a watch.
2054714 don't think I do. I'll get one after you send the link
2053781 Don't get me wrong. Aside from the minor incest thing that occurred in the "spur of the moment," I actually quite enjoyed the thrill. I got freaked out over that the soldiers were kept tiny and placed under their hooves for one and how they just... gobbled them into their mouths for extra fun. And yet I couldn't help but laugh and smile at the whole thing, because it was so freakish but fun.
hmmmm.......
2057534 Good hmmm? Bad hmmm?
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2108135 Thank you. It is nice this fic is getting a better reception as of late. The sex is pretty... out there, but I was happy how I wrote Luna.
I found the fic pretty good, what's with all the thumbs down?
Any plans for a sequel?
2116473 I don't know, to be honest. One reason that I strongly dislike a draconian thumbs down/thumbs up is that people can make wanton decisions. Although this fic was pretty graphic with its sex display, I really adore Luna's portrayal.
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I wouldn't even come close to calling this graphic. For better or worse I have read much more "detailed" descriptions of clop, and some were not as sincere and loving as you portrayed the characters in your story.
I feel that the story, content, and characters are in good taste. Celestia and Luna obviously care for their subjects and are having a more
"adult" type of play. Cadence and Shining Armor are doing what any married couple would do just in a little different way.
Maybe I'm just weird, I just don't think this type of "sex" is "out there"
2116570 I have some trouble with what is graphic. Friends Forever, I sent into EQD, and I didn't think it was that graphic. But the reviewer called it "deeply disturbing." So... this certainly had a lot of sex. I am just happy you enjoyed it. And yes, I was very, very particular about how Luna and Celestia would be portrayed. I was absolutely sure that their love and kindness was always apparent. On the other hand, on another site I have a fic where Chrysalis, disguised as Cadance, has several "volunteers" and... well... she's not as nice to them.
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Which site do you have the Chrysalis fic on?
2117189 FurAffinity. Fic: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8794735/
That has the most complete collection of my MLP fics. On here, I mostly post the higher quality stuff.
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Thanks Exilo.
that was.... different... to say the least, not entirely sure what i just read and don't know how i feel about it either.
2284431 Well, if nothing else I hope it was clear the princesses love the guards, and the guards love the princesses. Emotions are what is most important, no matter the content.
I hope your sentiment leans towars a Thumbs Up. If not, I hope it wasn't too frightening.
I have another fic on here called Poisonous Joke. Do NOT read that fic. The strangeness in that fic makes this look tame.
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well if anything that was clear I'm not going to give it a thumbs down because i could still tell it was well written but its still not quite my taste in story either. But you do show a clear knowledge in what is important to show in a story and you are correct emotions can make or break a story so good luck in any further work you do!
2287814 Thank you. I wish more people could objectively look at fics like that. My stuff is certainly not for everyone.
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Haha! well i try my best. I know my particular tastes do not coincide with everyone elses so I always keep that in mind especially when reading something that doesn't fit my preferences in story type.
However I do have a question that one pony the one with the ever changing cutie mark is he a reoccurring OC in your fics because that particular information didn't really apply in the entirety of that story I mean you introduced him but then kind of left it like that he didn't really seem all that important.
2287953 This fic started as a request for someone on FA. That one with the weird Cutie Mark is his OC, and appears in a few other fics he requested. I changed this fic around for posting on here, making it more about Celestia and Luna, so yeah, he's kinda baggage from the original fic. At the same time, I did want to keep a named Guard to provide some intimacy with Celestia and Luna.
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Ah... I'd suggest attaching a link to his original story than in case someone is curious about the character even though its not about him, he is still made out to be important.
2288010 I will think about that. At the moment, I can't access FA. Does this site have a policy against links, do you know?
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I have no idea, i'd think not theres an add link button right above where i'm typing? And sorry what does FA stand for?
2288064 No need to be sorry. I'm so used to the acronym it never occurs to me to put the full name.
FA is FurAffinity. I have an account there where I post a huge amount of MLP stuff. On this account, I mostly post higher end stuff or stuff that I was hoping to get onto EquestriaDaily.
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I've got this one shot that still needs to get through editing that I'm also hopin to get on there as well my other series I'm not putting much hopes in for but I'm doin it for fun anyways so whatever
ah cool thanks. Well good luck to you
>>Exilo OMG! So bucking adorable! I love this fic.
2288586 Yes, the gushes are many in this fic.
I adore giantesses, and I like portraying the princesses as gentle goddesses, so it all works out.
Is hate even real people just love you in a second after or is love real those who do don't know but those who don't do know its complex but its all true every word the spartan of the night is out *slowly vanishes as mist comes in*