On the anniversary of a day Luna would rather forget, she stumbles upon an earth pony engineer who is has been hired to fix up the castle, who reminds her why she resists the dark temptations.
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Why hasn't this got more views? It's really good!
2377592 It seems like on this site, it's more a matter of advertising than writing. You need to write a fic that you can submit to dozens and dozens of groups, and wait until they approve it so you can immediately submit it to said groups the very moment that it's up, so your total views will be boosted and you can get onto the front page, where you'll get more views and therefore stay on the front page.
Phew.
I'm unfortunately accustomed to few views, but what are you going to do?
Truer words cannot be spoken! I live under the same philosophy haha seriously after my courses are finished for the day i sleep through the rest of the day and do ally my work at night its so much more relaxing.
2378400 I like both night and day, and it translates to a strong affinity for both Luna and Celestia. I do find it odd though, that no one in Equestria appreciated the night, so I have been trying to build additional reasons for Luna's turn. Hopefully, now, she can understand that there are ponies like Sprocket and whoever that Pegasi in your avi is.
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Ah that would be Shatter Shield his story will be coming out soon well at least his early story of when he was just a colt his later years will be a bit longer I actually wanted to try something new with him see in his story he'd already fallen in love with luna long before she escaped her moon prison and his story starts off immediately where the second episode of mlp starts just in canterlot. Anyways this chapter was beautifully written and I found Sproket to be a enjoyable and lovable character which is impressive for only 2000 words.
2379555 Thank you. Sprocket and Luna go on to make sweet, passionate love under the moon. But I cut that out since fetish doesn't seem to be well recieved here.
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Actually I'm pretty sure I've seen quite a few groups on here for that kind of content fetish or no you just gotta look for it. You just got to find the appropriate audience for your work if you wish it to be judged more fairly. There is legitimate quality in your work even if its not for everyone. You could also always try your hand at writing in a new style and see how that goes over but its up to you.
2379609 I'm alright posting my more extreme stuff on FurAffinity. FA has a wider variety of fics, as well. I do post some diverisity here. "Return" is an example of an epic, this is pure slice of life. But I can never escape my Exilo voice.
Thanks, I loved this. It's an old story, but it's a great look at Luna's character.