Lost Cries for Help

by Lunafan1k

Alternate Ending 3

I finally gain the will to move again, my final movements, all in the effort to make the pain go away. I tie an end of AJ’s strongest rope to the banister above me, and slide a chair directly underneath. I hold the picture of my friends and family to my chest as I rear back on my hind legs. I delicately tie the other end of the rope around my neck, giving it a swift tug to make sure it won’t come undone. I take one last look at the photo, tears streaming down my muzzle, as I take that one last step forward.

The next thing I see is a pink blur burst into my house and somehow manage to untie the rope before my weight held it taunt. I hit the floor hard, knocking the wind from my lungs. I gasp for air as I find my footing, and look up to see a furious Pinkie Pie.

“What the BUCK are you thinking Twilight?! You’re lucky my Pinkie sense told me to come find you!” She yells. I can’t find words, she had caught me in the act, there’s no way I’m going to be able to talk this down. Not that my body will let me in the first place. As I look at the furious mare, all I can think is that she saved my life. She saved me so I can continue to live a life of utter despair, and I hate her for it. I hate that she cared. Something inside me snaps, my vision goes dark yet I can still see.

I glare at Pinkie, how dare she try to keep me here against my will, to keep me here to suffer? If she wants me to suffer, then so shall she. I focus, creating a black ball of dark magic on the tip of my horn. With a furious scream I launch it at the pink mare. She was too nimble and was able to evade my attack, but no matter.

I grab her in my telekinesis, the once soft pink glow now an inky black, and I pin her to the floor.

“Twilight! Twilight please, calm down it doesn’t have to be this way!” I can feel the fear radiating from her, and it feels good.

I walk up to her slowly as I grab the large wooden horse head bust from the table. “I hate you… This is all your fault…” I raise the bust over my head and bring it down as hard as I could. Pinkie screams in terror, unable to bring her pinned hooves up to protect herself as the bust crashes into her face. I lift the bust, Pinkie’s muzzle was broken and bleeding and she was crying in pain and fear.

I bring the bust down again, and again, and again. Eventually the sobbing stopped, but I didn’t. I wanted to see how big I could make the puddle of blood before I got too tired. Once I was satisfied, I tossed the bust to the side revealing a crushed scull of a pony. I smiled, I had done this. It felt powerful, thrilling, like I wasn’t even living until this point.

I let the blackness spread across my body, encasing me in a warm embrace. I cackled wickedly as I left the library, Queen Aura was hungry, and there was already such a feast waiting for me.

Comments

[SeventhBrony]

interesting alt endings I guess, um well not bad definantly deserves the dark tag
are you going to continue the main though? that sounded like it could get good

[Lelouch Vi Britania]

I wouldn't mind seeing how the main storyline plays out. It looks like dash might also have some hidden issues, which defiantly intrigues me

[Germgod]

I vote for main story to continue too, although the first two alternate endings are interesting too(the third is not very interesting to me because i am pretty much tired of evil Twilight stories by now, seriously, it seems that when most people want one of the main six to be evil, they pick Twilight)

[Sketchy Markks]

The main story had something going for it. would be neat to see that go on.

[Lunafan1k]

2285554>>2285495>>2285475 The main story will end here, because really, i could write an entire chapter of boring therapy that could easily be summed up in a paragraph

2285356 Sorry, one of the comments mentioned something about Twilight being more angry toward Pinkie, and I saw it as a plausible alt ending. Granted I probably did go a bit over the top but whatever.

Also, I plan on doing each chapter as a short story for various ponies and their attempted suicides, they will be basically telling Twilight that she's not alone much like how Pinkie told Twilight. So far I have ideas for Fluttershy, Rainbow, Applejack, and Princess Celestia.

[Lelouch Vi Britania]

2286457
That's too bad. I was looking forward to seeing celestias reaction, as well as what dash's problem was

[Lunafan1k]

2286642 *Facehoof* you didn't read my entire comment. I am writing their stories but the story will no longer focus on first person Twilight.

[Lelouch Vi Britania]

2286689
Oh wow, I feel like a complete idiot now. I guess I burned my brain out studying for midterms.

[furrypony]

It sounds strange, but I enjoyed reading the extra chapters, except alt ending 3. Sorry, but I really hate it when Twilight goes to the dark side.

The Day After gave me quite a scare. I think I'm going to avoid mental haspitals as much as possible.

The alt ending 2 was very in-character, considering Twilight was a scholarly pony. In fact, I thought that given a bit more time, she would attempt to make a simple "exit bag" and fill it with nitrogen (assuming that she had some compressed Oxigen Free Nitrogen in her basement lab) to achieve inert gas asphyxiation.

Some relevant statistical data: about 3% of male and 6.5% of female US physicians’ deaths in 1986 were suicides; 35% of premature deaths among physicians were due to suicide; suicide is the leading cause of death for physicians under 40 years old; and the suicide rate for psychiatrists is almost twice that for other doctors.

Also, a typo:

scull of a pony.

should be "skull of a pony"

And why did you start using past tense in the very last paragraph?

[Lunafan1k]

2291890 because first person present is only from Twilights perspective, and I decided third person past for spike and the other characters because I was tired of going through everything for accidental past tense words.

[Nova007]

2286689 hope you continue this soon

[Lunafan1k]

3088936 looking back I could have done more self reflection while she was in the hospital but at the time of writing it I just wanted to push it out. The alternate endings was me playing with ideas suggested in the comments

[Shadowed Rainbow]

3089151 I personally liked the story and the alternate endings. I wanted to give Twilight a hug though, and Pinkie.

If you happen to continue with the others, I'll look out for them... I wonder why they would try to kill themselves though... suicide is a terrible thing.

And reading that the main story was based off of your own experience.... you need a hug too. *hugs*

[SushiAndTomatoes]

This was a great read, i never knew these kinds of things were so universal... I will say its pretty accurate to what i went through too. anyway thats all!

[Dark95191]

Did.... You write alternate ways for twilight to commit suicide?
That's fucked up.

[CrossoverFanficReader]

9711439
eh, i'b say it's 'out' rather then 'in' (GET IT?). But i was thinking along the lines of something more painless, like OD'ing on Nyquil, or some other sort of sleeping meds.

[horses are fuckin weird]

>last updated in 2013
>"on hiatus"

damn

[DarkSnowGaming]

Will this story be updated, could we also see alternative versions of Twilight failing to commit suicide instead of succeeding?