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After a pony falls in Ponyville, Princess Celestia takes it upon herself to find the culprit responsible. But when she enters the Everfree Forest, something is amiss.

From the ashes of the Ecplise Wars that ended near a millennium ago, an ancient evil will rise. They will hunt. They will kill.

Now Luna, still having not forgiven herself for her rebellion against the throne, must fight one more time. But this time, she fights for light and life.

This time, she fights not for a throne of a kingdom, but the throne of love and forgiveness.

But what pony can forgive the sins of a goddess?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

awesome !!!!!! more please:twilightsheepish::rainbowdetermined2:

Very good! Somehow i doubt that Comes will be happy to find out that Equestria has Luna back to her old self. :pinkiegasp:

I have to say I find it a little tacky that Celestia can't affect them with her magic at all. I hope there's a good reason. Fairly ominous thus far. The road to conquest is paved with intended evils I suppose.

Have to say that the elements are the rational solution. Like above I hope there is good reason not to take the cheap and easy road out.

A little more exposition on Luna with regard to Zebras and the spell she used would be nice.

Very interesting story, I cant wait till the next chapter to see how Luna faces against her own son.

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