• Member Since 7th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 4th, 2012

Illuminate Sparkle


T

Cecilio lived his life in a disconsolate reality where he truly lacked happiness.

After a meeting with an unidentified creature he may choose to either continuing living in misery or rise from the ashes and achieve what he failed in the past.

That is... If life was that simple.

Rated teen however: This fanfiction is a very dark one, eventually one will understand that.

My first fan-fiction, friendly comments or constructive criticism is appreciated.

(Keep in mind though, as long as the story is not complete eventually some parts may be unexplained, until later.)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 22 )

Awww, it's a really nice story so far!

And that was pretty well written, considering the fact that I could feel Cecilio's heartwarming joy! :twilightsmile:

1240778

Thank you very much.:pinkiehappy:
However, without spoiling too much, I can assure you that the tags will eventually become more relevant in the story.

Whoaoaoaoaooo! Now I must wait for the next chapter! :rainbowderp:

Well i must say this was indeed a good story.:moustache:

1263185

If I could actually teleport objects I would have given you a cupcake as a "thank you"

Or wait, that would have been a horrible cupcake since I lack baking skills.

Still, it's the thought that counts? :applejackunsure:

Why this story no featured in feature box?! :flutterrage:

Seriously though, this story is absolutely awesome! :rainbowkiss:

1264005

If people would give this story a chance I'm sure it's popularity would have increased. However, such a petty reason won't stop the story :raritywink:

1264021 Because sometimes the description needs a very good hook, otherwise, they don't bother reading it :ajbemused:

So for my next story, I gotta try to come up with one hell of a hook :applejackunsure:

1264044

E-yupp:eeyup:

Won't deny that the description to my story lacks "attention"

1264127 Oh well, I'll just consider it a special story for the few of us who do read it :twilightsmile:

Epic.
and....


-sniffle-....
Sad :fluttercry:

1269859
Even I, as the writer, had some hard time writing this. :fluttershysad:
However, everything has a reason, so do this fanfic.

Wow. What a trip that was to read!

All I could simply do was clap slowly while staring into the screen, haha.

1276528

I'm happy you felt like that because I'm pretty sure some of the readers may not have liked such an ending :applejackunsure:

Anyhow, my next fanfictions will have less dark endings, heck, even going to write a more comedian adventure:yay:

1277145 Comedy? What a change! :rainbowderp:

1277256

An never ending fanfiction, something I will work on between the other one I will soon start on, again a bit dark. This time more of an adventure and will also contain some action. :coolphoto:

Give me, maybe two days before entering into that tale::twilightsmile:

1277359 Ah!

I'm working on another fanfic of my own aswell :twilightsmile:
This is gonna be my second fanfic evah! Huzzah! :yay:

1277421

You better not cancel your first one :flutterrage:
and I wish you the best of luck to your second one, I will be reading it when released :rainbowdetermined2:

Ps: The fun has (soon) been doubled!

Sorry...:facehoof:

1277439 Oh no no no! I shall never cancel it!
and thank you! I wish you luck for your stories aswell! :raritywink:

Ps: The fun shall be doubled indeed! How many points will I receive?!
gyazo.com/5c538c1b286f18802046a897a3197d61.png

..... both Big Macintosh and I got appointed as heroes by our princess and everything ended in a orgies of long parties.'' ..... orgies? As if in, an orgy? I am dying! :rainbowlaugh: please do something about that, it just doesn't fit

Login or register to comment