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Lunafan1k


Navy Vet working IT, I usually write about whatever inspires me.

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The Nightmare has returned and is after the Elements and their bearers. Twilight, with the help of the mysterious Pinkie Pie, sets out to save their friends from the clutches of Nightmare and its hordes of abominations and demons while learning just what she truly is.

3-3-16 Hiatus for now, might come back to it some other time

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Shit, now THIS is going to be good, give her twin blades and twin guns (maybe) as well as a badass weapon for Pinkie and I'll be waiting for more, of course, I'm ready for more anyway. :pinkiehappy: This is going to be sick, you know what you should do? Have Spike be saved by Twi but become an anti-hero or villian overtime, that would be such a twist:rainbowlaugh:

Shit, this is going to be good, loved the DMC series. Wonder what happened to the Gods though? Can't wait for more:twilightsmile:

Love it so far. definitely looking forward to more. especially when everything develops

So this 'Void' is Limbo City:rainbowhuh:? Interesting:ajsmug:, I love the DMC series but my feelings for the reboot are mixed. I like the fact that Twilight learned how to fight but it felt way too fast for me even though Twilight is a fast learner but this is out of her element, so to speak. Other than that and the fact that Pinkie is still Pinkie... This is... THE...BEST...POSSIBLE...THING!!:raritystarry::raritystarry:

Soo...a DmC Fic....I knew someone would do it....
*Pulls up a chair*
We shall see.

2211201 Fun fact, i completely spaced that it was called limbo and re-named it the void! thanks for the reminder but i'll keep it as the void. I was thinking about doing the whole moral dilemma thing, but she was pressed for time and was about to die so it feels justified. as for the reboot i think they did a pretty good job. the weapon system took some getting used to and certain enemies are only affected by certain weapons, so facing a mob full of all types really puts your reflexes and strategy to the test. if you haven't already i say rent it and give it a go. its better than DMC 4 in my opinion.

2211226 I shall not disappoint my good sir.

2211284 DMC 3 was the best for me. I liked DMC 4 only for Pandora and Lucifer's design. I would agree that Twilight's near-death dilemma was justified. It also showed how she got used to it, I gather it was either due to adrenaline or a form of bloodlust she never knew she had. I'm not trying to say anything bad. It was just an observation. I would agree that the differing types and the weapons they were affected by was a good idea. I always spammed Gunslinger with Ebony and Ivory in DMC 3.:twilightsheepish:

They can make a DMC (Awesome game) fic, but they can't make:

A: Assassin's Creed
B: Borderlands
C: Halo
D: Manhunt

2211226

Oh yes we shall...
I was waiting for a DmC: Devil May Cy fic, and now I'mleft wondering if it'll be any better than what Ninja Theory can deliver.

PRETENTIOUNESS AWAY!!

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Well so far it is.

Moral dilemma? What moral dilemma? I was actually wondering why she had just let it cut her to ribbons at first...
It has a blade for an arm, part of its face is missing, and it's trying to kill you!
Forgive me saying so, Twilight, but I think that meets all of the necessary qualifications to maybe KILL IT WITH FIRE! :flutterrage::pinkiecrazy::twilightangry2::rainbowdetermined2::scootangel::moustache:reactionimage.org/img/gallery/1662575343.gif
Action scenes are lacking, and don't say what Twilight is actually doing,

she teleported up to it and unleashed a devastating combo,

and it follows DmC way too closely for my liking. You need to fuse worlds together in a crossover, not simply throw characters from one universe into another and make them take other character's roles. For example, I initially liked how you changed Limbo's name to The Void, :twilightsmile: but then I read in your comment that you had conveniently forgotten the name. :duck: Commence facehoof. :facehoof:
All in all, I think you need to take a deep breath :pinkiegasp:, step back :ajsleepy:, and get off your DmC high before continuing. I know what it feels like to get hyped playing a new game, or watching a new show, and immediately want to pair it with all of the other shows I love, but you have some plot holes that need to be filled (like how Twilight became a badass mid-air comboing martial artist the second she stepped into the Void :twilightsheepish:), and this story needs more content translated into MLP terms. You are doing well on that front with the Hunter being a Diamond Dog, and making the Nightmare the main antagonist, but perhaps what I'm looking for is a more fleshed-out plot. I know 3,000 words isn't nothing to sneeze at, but It feels like you could've done 5-6 thousand easily just by making the combat scenes longer. Combat is, after all, one of the defining characteristics of the DMC franchise, and you will be working with it for the rest of the fic.
Then again, this is only the first chapter, and you'll probably prove me wrong on everything in the next one. I look forward to such a day. :ajsmug:

I need MOAR when will it continue like/fave

This. So much this.

Take my yes all of them.

2210161
I really shouldn't be surprised to find you here as well.. :pinkiecrazy:

I am going to find a good number of fics I'm really going to like while recategorizing the ones in BadassTwi's uncat folder, I think.:pinkiehappy:

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3822504 I'm everywhere:yay: And that sounds AWESOME!:ajsmug:

Is this fic dead? Hasnt seen activity for over a year. I want to give a good DMC fic a chance, but I dont want to start with only 1 chapter from over a year ago.

More! There has to be more!

>unleashed a devastating combo

You need to actually describe the combination of moves.

8013379 maybe. perhaps. i doubt ill be continuing it because its just a poor rehash of DMC. I dont belive in deleting stories even if i am personally ashamed i wrote them. let them see the best and the worst, see how you progressed in writing. see how i dont like capitalizing my words or using proper punctuation if i dont need to.

8016883 I noticed. I only capitalize properly like this out of habit, but I stop when I don't feel like it.

Will this continue?
I remember reading this in 2019 before I made an account.

Honestly it makes no sense that Nightmare captured Spike since he wasn't one of the Bearers.
Why did Nightmare get him first instead of Twilight when it had the chance?

Its just disappointing that Spike needs rescuing like that..

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Really wished Spike wasn't shafted in this though..

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