An update! I shall read this as soon as I get the chance.

I was afraid this would never update! Glad to hear you're back!

damn, that's some mighty fine writing there son. Keep up the good work but try to update a little faster. Don't worry about the quality of the chapter either. If they turn out like this one then that's perfect. You are an accomplished writer.

I liked it for the most part. Wish you luck, on further projects/chapters!

Mmmm... you´ve all my atention with this

by the merciful hand of Celestia

hoof

The fact her throat and neck were ripped apart by some unknown force.

I think you accidentally a word.

Simply death by an unknown predator from the Everfree was all it took to bring Twilight, in all her magic ability, to her premature death.

There's not technically an error here, but you use the word 'death' twice in one sentence. It sounds a little off.
How about this: "An apparently random attack by an unknown predator from the Everfree was all it took to bring Twilight, in all her magic ability, to her premature death."
Or whatever. Just something other than "death" for the first one would be nice.

Sh!

Probably meant "Shh!"

Ponies don’t believe in these sort of things anymore.

Should be "sorts of things"
Or, alternatively, "that sort of thing"

She couldn’t remember how she ended up in a coffin, or as to why she was presumed dead.

The "as to why" bit sounds a little weird to me for some reason. Maybe just say "why"
Or you could add something else. "...coffin, or any reason that she would be presumed dead in the first place."
Of course, you could leave it as it was.

the deranged Twilight unhinged her jaws from the neck and stood up.

I don't think "unhinged" is a good word choice here. It makes it sound like she's dislocating her jaw to open it unnaturally wide. Mainly because that's what that word means.
"unclamped" maybe. Something to that effect, at least.

This is a fun fic. I definitely like it so far.
Keep up the good work!

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Thanks! I expected there to be faults, even after all that time I spent checking it. I appreciate the feedback!

holy shit
today ive spotted the rare
story update

2148888 Good fic, but needs to be updated.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
13:23_2/3/2016

It has been years since you uptaded. Hiatus, my foot. This story is dead, and it ain't coming back.

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You could've found that out by looking at how long the author has been gone!!!!!

Such a Shame the story is dead