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Shocking archeaologic finds throughout the world would turn Equestria upside down. Before Celestia, Nightmare Moon, before all of it, there was a great empire that was far beyond Equestria's own. And it left a massive legacy that would passed down as myths and legends, and the truth would only be rediscovered three thousand years later. It would prove strange habits, names of cities, languages, technology, engineering, everything Equestrian, unoriginal. But the ruling class of Equestria has banned any further research on the thousands of sites that could be traced to the myths. Only the truly daring and adventurous would dare break the law to find out if those ancient legends and creatures, in a time before ponies, were true. And Lyra Heartstrings believes in the ancients' existence, and embarks on a journey to prove it.
Cut me some slack bro, this is my first fanfic.
Teen for Foul Language
Canceled, I didn't like how I made it turn out and, if you can follow me here, my views of FiM changed and don't fit in with the story.
Plus, it's flat out hard to write a full fledged fanfiction when you are a struggling AP student.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 36 )

Looks pretty solid, always love 'Lyra is obsessed with humans' stories. Reminds me a bit of that Anthropology story that came up on here a week ago that's not a bad thing tho :twilightsmile:

Anyway i'll track, looks good so far.

The premise is good, and it doesnt really seem rushed.
Great job! :moustache:
5 stars and tracking.

This is a good story. Very well thought out and written. My next story was going to be based on something similar to this. Very good. Keep it up yeah?:twilightsmile:

Redskin's face should be an accuarate example of what i think about this story so far>>97569

I've been there as far as the long-:yay: trip....

Man, this story seems to drag on and on... You captured the cross-country driving experience perfectly! So far, so good. Some typos in this chapter, but as those above me put it, "MOAR! For the love of Luna! MOAR!!"

:yay:
Are there gonna be vaults like in fallout?
PS:
The plot thickens...

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Probably not, the way I have how us humans meet our end is quick, and wiped everyone out like the snap of the fingers, and in and around the time of, like, right now. No one survives :pinkiecrazy: :trollestia:

103136NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I WANTED LYRA TO MEET US!:raritycry::raritydespair:

Amazing... just... amazing
Keep this shit up!

I am gonna guess nuclear mostly because radiation = magic! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

Great chapter as usual!

One thing though, I think Trottingham is meant to be a parody of Nottingham, as opposed to Birmingham. Of course, it's nothing that can be confirmed, but it seems more likely and I think is the generally-accepted fanon. Felt I ought to point that out.

dear princess Celestia

WHAT THE BUCK?!

your -slightly pissed- fathful student Twilight Sparkle

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I now know. And feel slightly stupid. :facehoof: Like I said, I rushed.

And when the stars are right we the great old ones shall rise to reclaim the world that was rightfully ares.

I think it's obvious why Celestia wants it hidden.

She knows damn-bucking well how dangerous even the kind and gentle humans can be. And how we had a bad tendency to swing to great depths of evil, even with outstanding heroes among us.

Humans are bucking dangerous,, man. :twilightangry2:

109319 So are ponies. The only reason that they havent done anything remotely dangerous, is because they have it easy. That's all gonna change when the truth gets out, especialy with those who think they're lies.

Dear Writer

Of course we can't wait!! I mean Jesus Christ it's just to good! Also I believe that Trollestia nuked all the humans.... :trollestia:

I wonder if Celestias' misuse of magic will resurrect some humans?

Yuo gonna show twilights reaction to this?

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

All that is bad is that this chapter seems... Short?

Go Lyra! Find something hidden and turn into Human!!

Well, worse comes to worse, they could hop into an Abrams and smash right into Canterlot. Their military is puny compared to ours.
Oooh, maybe an AC130? I am so giddy on how the military shoot up shall end up!

Indeed. The slaughter would be most epic.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kUpvjiBpTjY&feature=relmfu
These will be the weapons of Ragnarok that they shall face.
They will all be terminated in Hellfire and Oblivion!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kEOpr2jai9c

Do you plan on continuing? I was having a blast! :fluttercry:

Aye... Welp, it was fun while it lasted.

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