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Doctor Perseus

I'm just a guy who loves to write.



This story is a sequel to The Doctor Whooves Chronicles Episode 2: Queen of the Moon

The Doctor returns Derpy to her time but their parting is put on hold with a surprise appearance by Carrot Top and two of her friends as well as the arrival a mysterious spaceship that crashes in a forest on the outskirts of Ponyville. However, something sinister resides in the ship and it has its eyes set on one target: Derpy Hooves.

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 40 )

ohhh i feel a paradox coming on! Oh yes! i looking foward to more.

I patiently await continuation.

Closed Paradoxes! Closed Paradoxes everywhere!

At first I was all like :pinkiegasp:
Then I was all :rainbowhuh:
Next I was all :trixieshiftright:
Finally I just :derpytongue2: :derpyderp2: :twilightoops: :facehoof:

But it is not a bad thing I'm guite interested in who this mankey dude is and how he knows derpy :duck: :twilightsmile:

... his neck? "Snicker-Snack?"

Ha! Jabberwockey! Man that got me.:rainbowlaugh:

"Jabberwocky" is the name of the poem, not the creature. The creature is called the "Jabberwock." Note the distinct lack of the letter "y."

Then again, it's our fic, not mine.

I've heard it go either way with it sometimes being called the Jabberwock and other times the Jabberwocky. Although it has been stated that the original "correct" name for it is the Jabberwock, I'm going to continue calling it the Jabberwocky in this series.

2448877 Fine by me. It's your story, so you could call it "Friedrich the Friendly Nazi," and nobody could really correct you.

You know, I'm always on this website anyway and the comment system is way better so I'm just going to read this here. :pinkiehappy:

My Derpy is quite popular in this story! :derpytongue2:

'"Wait a moment. Did you just say that you're the Jabberwocky? As in the Jabberwocky from Alice in...oh you've got to be kidding me!" exclaimed the Doctor.' Once again The Doctor is always right.

This is like the third MLP fanfiction that I've read that references Lewis Carroll. :pinkiegasp: Not that I'm complaining. I love Lewis Carroll! :raritywink:

But really what is the connection that these writers are making?

2449067 Friedrich the Friendly Nazi! :rainbowlaugh:

Never ceases to amaze me how good you are at coming up with aliens that seem to fit right in in the world of My Little Pony.

I cannot wait for the next chapter/episode!:pinkiehappy:

Wonderful, can't wait for more.

I like how this story introduces an air of mystery about how Derpy became Derpy. :derpyderp1: Can't wait to find out about that. It's one of the things that separates this from your other Doctor Whooves stories.

Derpy is so upbeat because that's her special talent. Her cutie mark represents her bubbly personality. :derpytongue2:

u must MAKE MORE!!!!:flutterrage:

I am. I'm currently writing episode 4 and you can check out that episode-in-progress now here on fimfiction.

YAY!!!!!! I wub ur stories, I read them everyday!!! their so awesome :rainbowkiss:

and when the jabberwocky returns. he will be screwed. yautja tech modded witb time lord science can be deadly, even to weeping angels...er...weeping pegasi.

these are awsome stories, i will favorite them all! you sir, have earned the respect of the only known blooded yautja hunter on gaia.

At least he didn't bring me back five months later or something.

I see what you did there. :trollestia:

Is that an arachnachimp? What's one of those doing on Equestria?

This reminds me of the 5th Squeak-Anon youtube audiotape, as it references the Jabberwok as the main enemy. People must see some connection.

i'm officially fan-girling over your stories!!! :derpytongue2: :pinkiegasp: :raritystarry:

i love this series!:rainbowkiss: and every time a new one comes out im like, :pinkiegasp: :pinkiehappy: but when i miss one im like :facehoof: which is usually what happens lol


One A.M! I am loving this, even though I should be in bed. Lucky me, summer came and now I've got all the time in the world and more! :pinkiehappy:

"Challenge accepted!" Lololololol!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

First, the convinient one weakness, then easily learning said weakness, then easy access to said weakness? The quality of the story has gone down a bit. There are too many plot conveniences. Other than that, great job! Love the story! :twilightsmile:

3158689 If it's that jabberwock, shouldn't he be vowing to kill the doctor and twilight too?

WHO WANTS DERPY!?!? I WILL UNLEASH 3 CRAZY PINKIEs ON THEM!!!:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
Really, great story so far. Have three derpy's.:derpyderp1::derpyderp2::derpytongue2:

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