A sequel to "A Scratch in My Heart", my other fic.
After attending Rainbow Dash and Applejack's wedding, one thing and one thing alone plagues Octavia's mind. Unfortunately, she makes the mistake of telling her marefriend, who responds in the worst way. Seeking refuge from the conflict, Vinyl Scratch attends a gig in Las Pegasus. On the way, she meets a colt whose actions will change the future of ponies that he hasn't even met yet.
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hahah take my name and translate it from latin to english and you ger brash beats you almost took my oc name
This actually looks promising. I'd like to see where this goes. Psh, ignore the down votes. Keep doing what you're doing and you'll get the right reputation this fic deserves
I enjoyed both of those other fics my friend. I can't wait to see more of this one...I do see some conflict coming this story though...Vinyl Scratch + random colt that enjoys sex + both being on a train to Las Pegasus = very interesting plot line (no pun intended you sick bastards!!!)
dont you dare vinyl scratch!
hurry octy! before vinyl does something stupid!!!!
dont you dare vinyl scratch!
hurry octy! before vinyl does something stupid!!!!
Dear lord, Vinyl's going to do something stupid isn't she?
Those songs did sound familiar
And this chapter was worth the wait 
2331434 I'm glad you think so
I know it's not quite a real progression in the storyline, but I'm trying not to speed through it.
2330305 Oh, come now. Vinyl is always about to do something stupid. The only question is: Just how stupid is it?
How is it that the moment I read the lines from the songs in this chapter I knew the names right off the bat and who they were?
Gods, I'm such a dubby. I can't help it though. Knife Party, Gemini, Flux Pavilion, Excision...I love it all!!!
Okay, okay wait. 190 proof?!
That's not a drink, that's straight up distilled moonshine.
That shit's illegal to drink in most places.
That stuff won't knock you on your ass, it'll kidnap you, throw you in a bag, and toss you off a bridge at night.
I know, because I've had it before. Everclear is some nasty stuff.
Worst. Hangover. Ever.
...
Totally worth it, though.
2732890 Bingo. And if Vinyl's good at making bad decisions sober, what do you think she'll get into while black-out drunk?
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No, that's why I think you should lower that number.
Even a shot or two of that stuff will have you knocked out within 10 minutes or so.
I've built up a tolerance over years, but I still get knocked out within 30 min of a couple shots of that stuff.
Not really enough time to make too many bad decisions, and even during that time you'll be twisted sideways. Forget walking straight, she'd be lucky to be walking in any direction.
But otherwise, liking it so far. lol
2732980 I mean, nobody really knows about their size for sure, but they are horses. They tend to be a bit heftier than the average human.
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Well, they're miniature horses. On average they don't weigh much more than a typical human, and less in some cases.
Look up miniature horses, the information is there. (It was confirmed in a tweet some time ago that the ponies were along the same lines as miniature horses, which is a particular breed)
Not to mention, but horses also typically don't react well to alcohol. They'll get drunk fairly easily, and it's also toxic to their system , more so than for a human.
Wait, did she lose her memory in the fall or did she get drugged up?
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I think it's a mixture of both.
As for the chapter: Tails is going to be in a looooot of trouble when 'Tavi and Vinyl finds out just what he's doing. And I have mixed feelings about that stallion helping 'Tavi. He seems good enough, but is mildly suspicious all the same.
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Thats what I was thinking.
As for the future I think its gonna the whole Vinyl doesn't trust 'Tavi and sticks with Tails til she gets her memory back. Also he never specified that Vinyl took illegal drugs just that she was drugged up when she got outta the hospital. As for the stallion I think it could be Discord he seems to fit those roles well but I'm not 100% sure
I'm so pumped for the next chapter, i wanna see if I'm right
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I meant the hit on the head with the drugs from the hospital. It may have been a little too much for her.
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Oh right yeah that makes sense
3133011 I agree if she dosint remember enything then wat happen wene she sees octavia will she remember her or not i mean how will she be abile to remember her past whith Octy. Will Octy have to kiss vinyl or like dose she have 2 WIN vinyls love of her back???????
What a shame, another sequel to a great story... Never to be completed...