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TheVulpineHero1


Hi, I'm British, and you're reading a bunch of stuff you don't really care about! Yay! Go easy on me, I'm still finding my way around.

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A collection of all the stuff I wrote, but then decided not to use. Maybe these didn't hit the sweet spots I was looking for, maybe they're a touch too long, maybe I was just having a bad day when I wrote them and thought they were worse than they are; regardless, they're here. Hopefully, you'll maybe get some enjoyment out of them, or better yet, offer some feedback that helps me refine them into something usable.

Edit: May well become a place where I put any random one-off practice pieces I don't intend to use for anything, but which haven't been 'rejected' per se.

Various characters, pairings, lengths and origins; all will be signposted.

Chapters (28)
Comments ( 40 )

....i'll read this later... but wow there's a lot more of rainbow dash/pinkie pie stories............................................... **tilts head**.............

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Well, that's just how it goes sometimes. All the Rainbow Dash/Pinkie Pie stories here were originally written as parts of the same collection; however, I ended up scrapping the collection halfway through, and I put all the stuff from it here. It's my biggest 'failed' project in the fandom to date in terms of completed individual parts, so it shows up as a disproportionate sample. :twilightsheepish:

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lol i'm not one of those extremely crazy over the top obsessed shippers. i really DO believe flutterdash/rainbowshy all the way though... but i'll treat it like a slight religion where i won't push it on other people like some do and i don't mind other's feelings on pairings =)
believe me, i've encountered people even worse than what i described.

i like reading stories that are well written anyway. not that i'll agree with the pairings sometimes. =)
i'm sure you're awesome!!! =)
(at writing and as a person)

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But, man. Chapter six is the most awful thing. :rainbowlaugh: Honestly, I hesitated before posting it, but hey. Everybody has their off days sometimes, and that happened to be one of mine. I'm glad at least somebody got some enjoyment out of it, though. :twilightsheepish:

This one needs to be a full on story. :twilightangry2:

"Excellent," interrupted Twilight Sparkle, and offered a marshmallow. "But I'd rather you were warm."

This line alone....

This needs to be a full story! :fluttercry:

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I would, but I'm really, really unsure about using Trixie in anything longer than this, for much the same reason as I never feature Derpy in anything more than a cameo. They're such loved characters in fandom that people already have much more well-thought out ideas of how they should act than I do, and I fear I'm liable to draw flak if I don't follow those ideas. I don't touch Lyra for similar reasons. Sorry about that. :twilightsheepish:

But this is GOOD. If you DID continue this, i'd read it. :pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp:This isn't DUMB! This is GENIUS. :yay:
Seriously though, don't short change yourself on your writing, this is certainly anything but DUMB.

Silly as the whole thing is...
I like the whole image of AJ as a shady fashion magazine dealer. :pinkiehappy:

Geoffry! Nooooooooo!
You will be remembered.
For you were tasty

Someone sticks your furniture to the ceiling.
First response is to reverse gravity.
Somehow, that just seems very Twilight :twilightoops:

*Grins* Very cute look at the likely relationship scenes of Dash and Flutters, any chance of these having tags attached to them?

I'd be interested in seeing more of these, I like the ambiguity of it and the emotion that you're able to bring through with so few words.

I don't really see the saccharine. I confess I pictured it simply as friendshipping other than the date line. Very sweet, and somewhat inspired my muse as well...

I'm not sure why you say you're not sure of how to write it, I liked this piece, it is simple and holds so much.

Honestly I thought this was rather sweet. The characterization was a bit exaggerated but honestly it fits considering you're only seeing each character for a few seconds and they're distracted.

*Grins* This is definitely a bit....off. It's cute and silly, but doesn't gain a heck of a lot in skill. No offense intended. It's still enjoyable though and I think it's a good piece of fun fluff. Which I think is often underappreciated.

It may be a touch cliche but I think it avoids being overly. Some sentences felt a bit kludgy to me but it was still enjoyable.

But blanching foods is so tasty! This one just felt too short. It didn't have as much impact as your other pieces.

Pinkie definitely feels a bit too overeager and Dash feels off being so bummed out. I think it would've worked better if she was perhaps more in denial than depression. I think Pinkie would've felt better if her part was extended. Having it all compressed felt...too much, but if there was more back and forth it might've helped slow it down and make it fit? I freely admit I don't know and hopefully you don't mind my multiple additions of 2 cents.

*Blink blink* I...wow..and I thought Kinsey was weird for shoving a toothbrush in his lower male anatomy to see what the experience would be like. *Grins* Interesting stuff, I could see this as a longer piece too.

Interesting vignette. I like this piece because it really feels as though it's a small part from a much larger story, it neatly shows that we've come in partway and manages to convey enough to let your brain fill in the missing details.

Sweet but unlike the previous one it feels like a different moment. The previous one felt like it was perhaps the beginning or very middle of the fic whereas this feels like it would fit closer to the end of things. As thought it's right before the climax or perhaps the denouement.

Interesting, this one at first glance, felt very self contained. Upon rereading I can picture it being from something larger though.

This felt like a misstep to me as well though I suspect you could better explain why than I could.

This didn't have as much impaact as some of the others did. Perhaps because it felt much more vague?

Clearly an excellent sort of madness. I didn't love the implication of the flat mane but that's the only criticism and even it lacks much in the way of emphasis or teeth.

Interesting. It almost feels like the promo piece for a larger fic. I didn't love the implication that it was "her" treasure but that's a bit of a knee jerk response I think.

Very sweet. I almost want to accuse it of being saccharine but I don't truly think it is.

Oh my, I need to stop. These things make me want to try writing stuff again, and that's not good.

They're just so cute and lovely though..

*Giggles* Very nicely done, this is a perfect little tidbit.

*Grins* Very nicely done. The characters feel very in tune. (I regret nothing.:rainbowlaugh:)

I dunno if I could say off since even Daring Don't shows us so little of her, but it doesn't feel as strong as your other works, though I couldn't pinpoint why. Still interesting.

Has a pinkie x dashie x flutters love triangle story run across your mind yet? I'm just wondering because, well that would be SO AWESOME. and painful probably.

I found it. It's the triangle. I knew you made one somewhere. Itis hurts so good.

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