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Rainbow Dash and her awesome team have been uncontested as the best online. . . Until now. They are pitted against a new team, one with an enemy who has risen from rags to riches on natural talent alone. Will their formidable team conquer once more, or will they fall to this newcomer just as many others?

Just a quick comedy I thought of the other day, figured it was worth trying to write out. Props to you if you could guess who the pony was before the very end.

Marked teen for mild violence and language.

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What game were they playing?

OMG that ending! :rainbowlaugh:


1151793 Woohoo! Thanks :pinkiehappy:

1151801 I'm not a big FPS gamer on account of having the world's worst internet, confining me to campaigns, so I don't know very many of them.

1151829 Actually...
i made that up.

1151843 Then I passed with flying colors! :rainbowlaugh: (<---- Oh look, flying colors!)

1151883 Never seen it :fluttershysad: I wasn't kidding with the shitty interwebs comment.

I would have said it looks more to me like Halo, what with the shotguns, pistols, automated voice, shields and banter, and just the whole layout of the game as well as the countdowns and endgame lobbies. That's just my opinion anyways

1152089 Hey, if that's what you say, then that works fine. I didn't really have much of a plan behind the game itself, just that it's a FPS with that kind of layout.

Lovely story. As soon as I saw the screen name "The Last Angel" I knew that it had to be either Fluttershy or Angel Bunny.

1152697 Yep, I wasn't overly subtle about that one. But I'm glad you enjoyed it.

This reminded me so much of this other fic I read once, check it out , if you've never read it, Twilight Sparkle and the grand galloping gamer, it was kind of like this one except it went way more into the gaming aspect of it, like yours it has a great end....

Anyway, good story:derpyderp2:

1276375 Thanks, I'm glad you liked this one as well. Looks like I'm starting to be worthy of that Watch after all :pinkiehappy:

Oh gods. Terrible are you. Absolutely dreadful. I can't believe the horrors!!! Just kidding. That was awesome. I couldn't stop laughing at the end. My side hurts so bad right now!!! Fluttershy of all ponies. Fluttershy!!! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: 10 of 5 mustaches.

I hadn't thought that I would favorite this story, but that ending, Wow.

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