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Vonderbolts !! Me IZ German
what the fuck am i trying and failing to read here?
yea cant read this till the names are proper english. wonderbolts Pegasus pegasi exc.
Vat am I reading!? NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN NEIN!
Eeeeee, at least put quotation marks around dialogue.. Anyways, I think your story has potential, just needs some major editing. Or maybe start over.
1835295 An editor can't save this. No one can.
This is the best fanfic on this site
This story is so touching... THIS IS THE BEST STORY EVER
Good concept, actual thing was bad. But, with a big touchup and some extremely slow pacing, this could be a good story.
On The Wings of Love [Rewritten]
Waddaya say?
Oh My God! I can't stop laughing. Insta Like!
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German? No surprise you failed. They are Wonderbolts.
Okay, actually I'm kinda joshing 'bout "no surprise", but still-- do not correct mistake if you aren't sure 'bout it. Pleeeaaaase.
AND, all stories from that man are somewhat ugly. Though it's pretty clear they are supposed to be, because they are really BAD stories originally written in Russian and then translated with translate machine
P.S. fxd by Russian, lol
P.P.S. On the other hoof, those stories are quite famous (notorious, if you ask me) on Tabun (tabun.everypony.ru - Russian community site; by the way, popular one - at least as popular as its main site, everypony.ru) 'cause they are supposed to be JOKE stories, you know. Still no laughing for me because of bad sense of humor probably...
3124616 ....I care becuase?
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What do you mean? If it is "I don't care" thing... Okay then, was just trying to explain the situation.
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Why can't I LIKE and DISLIKE?!
The story...I'm so sorry you lost your fingers and had to type with hooves.
This... THIS IS AMAZING! This is the greatest masterpiece I have ever seen since I read Twilight! This deserves to be displayed in the list of the top -11 works of fiction of all time!
Sarcasm aside, this could REALLY use some work... Not even SOME work, but Ultimate Fanfic Overhaul work... And some of the names appear to be in Russian..... But you know what? I'm favoriting, because I know even the shittiest of fics can be salvaged with enough work.
This fanfic literally gave me herpes.
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No. Just no, this shit gave me so many STDs I could put Amsterdam to shame.
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I posted that comment twenty-five weeks ago...feels like it's been a year.
Das auto.
There, I contributed to the German theme of this comment section.
This story is a special kind of bad. Really.