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Rise and Fall

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SGDragon

SGDragon #1 · Dec 12th, 2020 · 1 · ·

You really need to learn grammar. This looks like it was written by a 3rd grader. I would suggest you just read stories that have proper English for awhile, as that's one of the better ways to learn how to write.