Twilight meets a strange pony, who is the lord of time and she decides to use it to help a friend of a pony, but who knew that a single change in the past, so many promises of change. Now, it interferes with the doctor of love ponies, which she knows very well
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Do you even fucking try to add story to your story? Most of this garage was just dialog. Massive mistake. Plus, all your characters act like machines. Good job trying to be original. Another Doctor and Twilight fic, great! Why don't you go do a Fallout: Equestria fic? Your non-existent fans would love that. Just, Stop, Writing. This isn't for you.
Oh my god, what did I just read. This isn't even like Gainbow Dash, which was just so hilariously bad that it was good. This was just...terrible. It was all dialogue, the grammar was awful and seemed like it'd been through google translate, there was little to no description and the plot made no sense.