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It was an ordinary day in an ordinary human world, where he lived, again, the same as a regular guy, a musician. His life would be so-boring and stayed ... But suddenly, in his apartment there are three colts: Sweetie Belle, and Skutalu Eplblum.

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No. Terribly written. *shudders* I'm a grammar nazi... So I get the shivers from looking at this. I agree with the comment above me; learn more English. PLEASE. And pony terms. Colts are boys. My rating? :facehoof: FACEHOOF.

But suddenly, in his apartment there are three colts: Sweetie Belle, and Skutalu Eplblum.

Nigga, your grammar just went full potato.

Comment posted by EmiryLi deleted Jul 29th, 2013

A guy named xXSoundspeedXx on Youtube made a video reading your fanfic. I think you need to see this video and laugh at yourself.

'Cough' Best fanfic ever.

I just had a seizure. Please write more. :trollestia:

How the FUCK does this get passed by an admin but mine gets denied for a fucking grammar error? The is whole story IS a grammar error!!:flutterrage:

Being able to say (what)?

3131916 Maybe they took pity on an obviously retarded person?

Hey, jbond, I made a slideshow of mspaints for this story. Here:

Your welcome.
P.S. Write a sequel

I love this. Please make a sequel because this is the funniest shit I've ever read!

:applejackconfused::rainbowhuh::derpyderp2:Maybe it makes more sense in the original... Vietnamese? Swahili? Basque?

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Russian.
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And no, it doesn't add any more sense to the 'story'. Not a single drop of it.

1901205 This comment almost killed me a year ago by way of asphyxiation, and somehow i found it again, so I feel obligated to thank you for it. I salute you, and hopefully not ruin your mind with the remembrance of this story.

4592210 Thus, you've have come full circle in the land of the bad fanfic.:coolphoto:

4682988 I'd like to say I feel accomplished--but somehow I just feel more pain as a result.

I'm going to hang myself...

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