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Private is invited to attend a lunch with Princess Celestia herself. Will the detective be able to handle himself in front of the Princess of Equestria? Also, just what is Celestia keeping from him exactly? Meanwhile Irenius is starting to get a taste of life in Ponyville. Both parties may get just a little bit more then they bargained for.

(Taking place after Case 15 which I consider to be Noir's midseason finale, this tale leads into the second half of the season. and will drop many hints as to what to expect upcoming)

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I dont know what to say....

1772591Is that a good thing?

1772593 sometimes it is.. but i will give this a read. and a like I might as well. :pinkiehappy:

Mmmm.... delicious foreshadowing... so sweet and crunchy.... :derpytongue2:

I love these little side stories almost as much as I love the actual case files :pinkiehappy:

Calling a character Prometheus always makes me think of this.
:pinkiehappy:
And why does the youtube button never work for me? :fluttercry:

Wait, how does this occur during Too Many Pinkie Pies when Applebloom talks about Babs Seed to Diamond Tiara?

1774091I have the continuity made a little bit different here. I mentioned in my blog that some events of season 3 are going to occur out of order for convenience sake.

1775126 ah. Must've missed that blog, sorry.

1775336It's okay, pretty much the same continuity of the show is going to happen from here on. Except the Crystal Empire episode is going to happen later as stated here in the story

Well, looks like we're about to head into another arc! This one seems interesting. I must ask, are you going to leave cases to focus on Private and the elements battles for a few stories?

Also, after playing Civilization V non-stop this week, I can't help but think of the intro, in which your father has a dream of dark forces of war.

Good side story!

1776262Private will have to deal with the fact he's an element for the rest of the series. Private probably won't get called away to save the Crystal Empire or anything but he'll still go on adventures with the Mane Six.

1776262 What took you so long? I always check the comments to see what you had to say and this one took... FOREVER!

1777209 Read half the story eating breakfast, had to go to school then, came back and read the rest of it, then commented.

1777209 Read half the story eating breakfast, had to go to school then, came back and read the rest of it, then commented.

1777209Hey Shattered, I'm working on chapter 2 right now, you should get it pretty soon

1777305 Grr. I'm never going to have time to work on my own story at this rate.

Adamus and Evona the first earth ponies

I immediately thought of Epona.


Anyways... Prometheus? With that green text it seems he must be another of Private's ancestors.

“Not even my faithful student’s hoof in marriage?”

“I hope to get to know her better,” he suddenly smirked. “I’ll need to talk about grandchildren with her soon.”

teh trollz:trollestia:

I turned around, my eyes widening at the sight of a horde of pink bouncing my way shouting, "FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN!"

Oh shit... :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Prometheus...for some weird reason, I couldn't help but think of Sombra for some reason...strange. Good fic however. :eeyup:

I turned around, my eyes widening at the sight of a horde of pink bouncing my way shouting, "FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN! FUN!"
Ok I want the whole town to get in to my space ship now if we are going to save the multiverse

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